Interesting so far :D I like it.
This is so interesting and mysterious! Even though the chapter was short, it introduced some ideas that give direction to the story. I'm intrigued with Kagome. My niece, who has a learning disability, sits and writes people's names over and over hundreds of times. She will write family members' names, or like when she is watching re-runs of Baywatch, she writes "Mitch" over and over, filling up sheet after sheet of paper. It will be so fun to find out what's up with Kagome, and why the other workers at the hospital left. Can't wait for more insight...
Lexie (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Aug 2010
wow. please keep going this started really good!
pleasse to be updating!!
Madison (Chapter 1) - Sat 28 Aug 2010
This is really nice, and I love how so far everyone is pretty much included, true to their personalities.
I cannot wait for more! This store seems really interesting.
I got this funny image of a chibi Naraku peeking out from under the bed like a frightened kitten...
kim` (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Feb 2010
please finsih this my sister has been to a ward and i can relate tot his story.
Mimiru (Chapter 1) - Fri 25 Dec 2009
Oooo! I really liked the overall feel of this fic. And for some reason picturing Naraku under his bed all...suspicious like because of the 'spiders' got a chuckle out of me lolz.
PLEASE continue
ahhh!!! can't wait to find out why she's there!!!
ollie :) (Chapter 1) - Sat 08 Aug 2009
I love it already! I hope you make it into a long fic, it really has great potential. :D
This was pretty good! I wonder why Kagome was there...Anyways I can't wait for the next chapter!
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