HMMM... I HAVE A FEELING THAT SESSHOUMARU WAS THE ONE TO PURCHASE THE HOUSE NEXT STORE...
Of course you have still kept my interest. I've been waiting for you to update this magnificent tale of yours. Once again, I'm absolutely loving Naraku in this. He has 9 personalities one of then being Kagura, which causes him to twirl around in his room making wooshing noises ... lawd made me chuckle quite a bit. There's still the mystery surrounding Onigumo himself, Myoga and Kagome. It is nice to see Sango in a lucid state. I'm curious as to what Sesshomaru is pondering, now that he's realized he is the only one offering financial aid to the ward. Thank you for the wonderful update!
Kae (Chapter 3) - Thu 14 May 2015
Yay! Sango's lucid! I'm so glad Miroku didn't lose her completely. It must be horribly difficult for him to see her like that.
I am baffled by Kagome though. Why is she there? She seems completely normal. Does she have a second personality known as "Kikyou?" Or maybe she thinks she sees demons or has miko powers? I can't wait to find out! Looking forward to your next update.
Keep it coming
Yeah..i hope you keep the promise. Dont finish it in the next ten years. Xoxo..
I wonder why is kagome there,if she's acting normal. Is inuboy here too?
I love sesshomaru being a doctor. I hope you'll finish this story.
No Uta (Chapter 3) - Thu 14 May 2015
This story is fantastic as is. It is in no need of any demons. Another amazing chapter full of mystery. I think I know who Miroku's wife is and what the jingling of the bell represents hee hee. I'll not say anything further. ;-) I absolutely love where this is going. I'm glad you've returned to us and have decided to continue this captivating tale. Thank you for another wonderful update!
Thank you so much! I haven't read any fanfiction in probably several years but I checked my e-mail and it told me this story had been updated. I honestly had forgotten completely about this story so I read both chapters and can't wait for more! I eagerly await your future updates!!
I love this spin on the late nineteenth/early twentieth century asylum! I'm very curious to see the 'ailments' Kagome has and/or the circumstances for her confinement! Also, I've enjoyed your attribution of their televised characteristics as part of their state of mental health - particularly with Naraku and his schizophrenia. Out of curiosity, are Sesshomaru, Naraku, and Myoga human? I can't wait to see what happens next; great job!
-FDS
Need more please :O
Ulam (Chapter 1) - Wed 13 May 2015
Well darn, this sure caught my interest super quick. I'm glad you've decided to update (even four years later) :}. Looking forward to see what exactly is off with Kagome.
No Uta (Chapter 2) - Wed 13 May 2015
Myoga had gone mad after being accidentally locked in Onigumo’s room for 48 hours eh? He is now a resident of the asylum as a result. Holy crap, I wonder what in the hell (pun intended) happened in that room? Ok ... is it wrong that I laughed hard and I mean ridiculously hard at Onigumo's launching of his feces everywhere and writing obscenities with it on the walls? This was my absolute favourite part of this chapter. I'm enjoying the enigma that is Kagome in this. So ... there's something not quite right with her yet it's not exactly a mental illness. It seems that both Kagome and Dr. Taisho are intrigued by the other. Phenomenal chapter and story so far. You have captured my interest. I will definitely follow this. Thank you for the superb update.
No Uta (Chapter 1) - Wed 13 May 2015
This is brilliant and off to a wonderful start! I absolutely love the plot line. An asylum? Wow what a fantastic idea! I loved your portrayal of Sango and Naraku in this as patients. I laughed so bloody hard at Sango charging the door and Miroku calling her, not very social bahahahaha nice! Naraku hiding from invisible spiders! Omg I love that! Onto our Kagome, hm...she's definitely a mystery. I am enjoying Miroku's role in this as well. Onto the next chapter I go.
Hm, interesting...
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