Dang girl...that was RAW. But I actually really enjoyed the different take this provided. I want to punch Sesshoumaru in the face when he was being a jerk (on purpose), but he rapidly grew on me after that. Their arrangement I actually really loved, esp. in how he was explaining himself. And then with Kay's response, it kinda left the feeling that while he may not think or call it one thing, maybe it could be eventually without him having to label it. I don't know. Random thoughts while reading. Just wanted to drop in and say great job! This is one of the most interesting takes on their relationship I've seen!
I loved this one! It was so raw and jaded but very real all at the same time. It's was so realistic and flowed so well I thought I was listening to two people actually having a conversation and not reading a story. I think you did an AMAZING job.
Pfairy (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Feb 2020
This was great! I really enjoyed it and if you get around to a sequel, I will be there. ?
This was a great story!! It was realistic and true to their characters yet romantic. It would be very interesting to see how they continue along in their relationship :)
I love this! It's wonderfully written and though it's a big difference in her character, you've kept it realistic and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Please write a sequel! Would love to see how it continues!
wow so hot . . i like the story and i would like to ask for sequel
Nicole (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Feb 2020
Seeing Kagome's character like this was hard, I'm not gonna lie. Nevertheless I LOVED this. No surprise, I have loved everything you have written lol. I would be very interested in a sequel if you ever got around to writing one.
One of my favorite parts was Sesh being cheeky and demanding the lap dance and then losing the upper hand he thought he had lololol.
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