It was a different take on how to get our favorite couple together, but I enjoyed it! They just want someone who understands them. <3
I love this portrayal of Kagome. She was multidimensional and unapoligetic, which is really refreshing. I'd love to see a glimpse into their lives in the future (dribbles perhaps).
Crescentmoon18 (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Sep 2020
Amazing work! Wonderful portrayal of raw emotions and character inference. Waiting patiently for the sequel..
Oh I really hope you feel inspired to do a follow up to this. I love this story.
I love the openness and honesty Very well written as always.
Kreve (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Aug 2020
This was amazing, A sequel would be lovely I will be hopeful. I wish this a chapter story I can see so many ways this can go.
I would looooove to read a sequel on the GFE that would be wonderful. I loved this story so darn much! I look forward to more of your works! Definitely made a fan out of me!
Vane (Chapter 1) - Sat 04 Apr 2020
OMG I LOVED IT. I really really need a sequel of this! I didn't notice at first sight that this was an OS but, fuck! I really need more of this!
Amazing work!
Niomi (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Mar 2020
Just WOW. What a different tone. I see the vision you had for this story and it was executed perfectly. Definitely not the precious Kag we're all spoiled with, but that's what makes you a great writer! This was a real lift situation x crossover with their characters. Looking forword to more fresh, one shots!
Ardis (Chapter 1) - Fri 06 Mar 2020
This oneshot has a hauntingly slice of life kind of vibe to it. Its a perfect mix of everthing which is why it feels believable. I loved it. It was done in a no nonsense fashion and i hope the sequel is in a similar vein. Keep it up!
izzyco2001 (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Mar 2020
I am thoroughly impressed. I'm usually not a big fan of kagome being a stripper, but you REALLY pulled it off. I am hugely impressed. This is so well written and wonderful. I DEMAND a sequel..... please :) and please soon. Amazing! SIMPLY AMAZING!!!!
This was so good, but so sad! I felt horrible for the way that things had turned for both of them. I was happy that they found one another and came to an agreement of sorts to stay together in a mutually beneficial fashion. Well don and I'd be curious how you would cont this.
Michiteachme (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 Feb 2020
It was awesome! Very nicely done.
i liked this story. i was sad in a way b/c they seemed lonely to me. i was surprised at how honest and up front they were with each other. i guess its best to go into a relationship knowing everyhing so there won't be any problems later on. i think you can do a couple more chapters and make it as great as it is now. maybe you could do a backstory on Kagome and Sesshoumaru. you know, show how each has changed over time and haow theyy came to be who they are now. who knows, maybe they might decide to have some pups. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
Definitely interested in seeing their relationship develop. What great concepts!
Well Well! That was rather impressive, I must say. Its the first time I've ever felt the need to ask for a sequel in all my years on this website. I typically don't care much for stories like this where Kagome is in a situation like that. But wow this realness was awe inspiring. Sesshomaru's petty behavior during oral was perfectly done! And his desperation to have her without it being too obvious was felt as I read. Well i meant him trying not to seem like her needed her at first was perfect and didn't come off as cliche. I am glad I gave this a try. I'll be reading more from you if you have more.
Wow this is pretty great and I for one would to see how well they make out of this relationship.
I would love to see a sequel. It would be interesting to see how their relationship dynamic develops as time goes on
This story is so sexy. Nice work
Mecca (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Feb 2020
I freaking loooved this. Ahh, you are a master story teller, for real! I live in Portland, Oregon, so this rattled me at first lol! I remember the last time I was in a strip club - back in my 21st birthday lol, great stuff. The scene with Kagome giving Sess a lap dance was tops, the whole thing giving me Pretty Woman vibes, but I'm glad she let him kiss her ;) Amazing, once again! I bow at your genius and intellectual writing prowess, the smut has been delivered and it was sooo good. It would be interesting to read the sequel! Your stories are amazing, I check every week (if not every day)!
Alexis (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Feb 2020
Wouldn't be mad if you decided to keep going with this story! So good!
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