Just one more chapter, why there is so much more you can do with this story. Its been a great stort
Oh my gosh! That first dream sequence nearly had me craving as I read this on the bus going to work! Talk about real! I really thought the baby had been lost. I'm loving this story so much and will be sad when it's over, but you've done an awesome job!
Toni (Chapter 20) - Fri 06 Jan 2017
looking forward to your next chapter sorry that it wi? be the last one would have liked to see you develop the story more perhaps a sequel.?
Poor kagome. I wonder if the nightmares are actually a fear she has of losing another baby (that sometimes happens when you lose a baby I know that from experience. ) or is she just having nightmares from the pregnancy itself? I know some women actually have nightmares constantly while their pregnant. My mom waslike tthat with all 9 of us kids. Sorry got off track. I love how the story is going so far. Can't wait for their baby to be born. I can't wait to see how katai acts around it. I hope he's a better sibling than his own father and uncle are to each other
Im sad to hear there is only one more chapter. Do you really have to make ys wait one more week???
Koree (Chapter 19) - Mon 02 Jan 2017
Awwww i can't get over Kags & Sessh ! They get better with every chap :)
Jean (Chapter 19) - Wed 28 Dec 2016
Great chapter! I'm glad Sess and Kagome worked out their relationship, and Sango is figuring out how to help her daughter. There is a paragraph when Sango is back home after talking with Kagome that had a sentence that doesn't belong, maybe want to check it out. I can't wait to see what happens next!
iin (Chapter 19) - Mon 26 Dec 2016
oh, had they been mating yet? I'm still confused.
This story is wonderful, please update the next chapters quickly! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Natalia (Chapter 19) - Sun 25 Dec 2016
Amazing! Thx for the treat! But the time when you switch to sango walking in her but there are some confusing sentences. It confused me. Check if you have time! In rest awesome! Merry Christmas!
I can't wait for more, great chapter! Merry Christmas!
So the truth is in the air now. Let's see how well they develop after this conversation.
Koree (Chapter 18) - Wed 21 Dec 2016
Awwww ". I am fond of you " is like a " i like you " in Sesshomaru terms lol Amazing chap :)
Hi, i love this chapter, and wait for the next.
Great job. (: I love that Katai went to Shippo for help, and that Souten and Shippo are a couple! I look forward to the next chapter, you left us in such a pivitol spot!!!!!
It's great to unwind after a hard day if work with such a good story. Thank you
I want the next chapter now! :'(
Thanks for the update! I hope that Sess and Kags get everything worked out finally and the baby is healty and happy. I wonder what it will be??? I also wonder is Sesy nose is so good that he can smell what sex the child is before it is born.....
Anyway Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to everybody out there!!!
Love the update.
candy (Chapter 18) - Tue 20 Dec 2016
I like the idea of Soutan being Shippo girlfriend. Can't wait for the next update.
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