Great start

this was lovely!

My heart is broken! I cried so bad with that ending. beautiful tale nonetheless. Thank yoU! 

Im not crying! You’re crying!

this story tugged my heart strings, I love it!

A few things about this story. First it is an amazing piece of work and loved every bit of it. The charters were beautifullay written. And it flowed well, no rush of anything and I greatly appreciate that. saying this though do to what happens to Kagome i would place a trigger warning in the description. Any woman who has lost a child could react to this and cause more trauma. It’s just a suggestion since I know woman who have had this happen and wouldnt wish for them to go into a story not knowing something like this was going to remind them of their loss. But as I said I loved this story, it is real, raw and just beautifully don. Thank you for sharing this with us.  

Nice clean ending but how come he did not chare his inmortality with her. ....

Lovely story but disappointedending.  What happened to extended life by being with a yokai.

Last is right.  He only show interest in the pup not the person that is carrying the baby.  He don't make her the next lady of the west???  Why??  Living in a cave?? Why?? That's not the human way. Especially to a person from the future.

OK. I have to said his.kagome been from the modern era should know that some babies entangle in the umbilical cord.  It is not because of the women activities.  Yes. It is painful but I imagine that in the old era they didn't have the knowledge to save babies like they do now.  By the way what happened to the well??.  

The story is really good  I do hope you finished it.  I can conceived a modern women that decided to live in the past. Maybe this is an idea that needs to be explored for another story!!! What do you think???

I kid you not I really cried at the end of this story when I found out they both died and how sesshomatu went but this was awesome glad that I finally finished the story been meaning to it was really good.

AMAZING !! I definitely didn't expect for Kagome to die much less Sesshomaru because he was a Yokai but she lived a long & happy life with more children she could ask for , and Sesshkmaru finally found love they died knowing the other loved them deeply though it wasn't said itvwas  tragically beautiful i really enjoyed your story it was sad ,funny , & beautiful all at once definitely in my top five !! Thank you for sharing such a delight with us & i hope to read another from you soon :)

Such a beautiful bittersweet end too a lovely story. I can just imagine Kagome trying to hide from an amorous Inu. Thanks for sharing your muse with us.

When I read this kind of stories, where Sesshoumaru is still taciturn but it is really beautiful to see him as a mate, faithful and protective, a proud father, is touching.

But your story has earned a very special place with this final. I do not know exactly why, I mean, I have read similar stories in that Kagome maintains her same lifetime and he is left alone and with their children. But this final, that part, made me cry.

It was special, it broke my heart, although in a good way. It was bittersweet, but I do not regret having read it and having shed a few tears, it was a perfect ending

Thank you for your story.

So sad its over!! But I'm beyond happy that they all ended up having such happy lives.

This was my first time reading your story, and I have to say I loved it! How you had Kagome and Sesshoumaru grow so close and eventually fall in love was beautiful. The ending was sad, but again beautiful in how much he truly loved her.

i do think you made Inuyasha's situation much better then it probably would have been though. Since the village people only came to accept him due to Kagome. People where a lot quicker to "throw stones" then. I imagine that the village would have seen Aya as a whore and the baby a bastard. They most like would have reverted to their dislike of him. I can see Miroku being more accepting, but Sango would not have taken to the woman so quickly, especially after she heard the story. Since she would have seen the woman as a whore.

I mean Aya slept with a drunkard she didn't know anything about supposedly, while she was completely sober. Though she later says she knew the hanyou had a wife, plus everyone already knew of him and his miko through their travel, and this was the Hanyou she was seeking. So I don't think she was actually being honest, and in fact deserved the whore label, but that's just me.

Either way I really enjoyed your story!

Omg that made me cry. That was so sad and so beautiful. And I have never seen am ending like that. Omg I love it. T-T

can we pleeease have a chapter in Sesshounaru's pov? and hey, what about more of his past? i don't think we ever got to know more about how his father had a connection to the gods and stuff.

Thank you, ????, I liked it.  Nothing is ever needed unless YOU Truely feel that it is.  

I did a loud unintentional "AWWAHUGH" sound when i read how Sesshoumaru hugged Katai after falling. people are sleeping. oops. XD

as much as i hate kagura, i LOVE katai so much. omfg, he's so adorably and hilariously blunt. XD