I think I read this chapter three times already, I reviewed on fanfictions as well but it still on let me go! It's still on my mind! I applaud you for creating such a different kagome! We are used to her being one way you destroyed her stereotype like a soap bubble! Bamse! I never read a kagome who sunk so low and is so sorry to use the word, pathetic. I wonder what really happened? I know first hand that the world is not a nice place, the life is cruel and hard and she doesn't have support but damn! What really happened? She doesn't even refute the word whore and that just makes me sick and leaves such a bad taste in my mouth! Greasy hair bags under eyes and to ,that, smell on her... From the summary you wrote I still wait for that epic battle confrontation against the world stereotype and bigots but the kagome you now show isn't fighting, she gave up! Obviously I don't know what you have in mind for that big project with hanyou but I can say I am disappointed in her and the way she is going! Women get dumped every day but the world isn't ending! I didn't have an easy life I know it but being abandoned and alone in a different country where I had no one didn't deter me, I survived. She refused to fight? Why? I am so curious! I really hope you will update sooner than later! I am not trying to be rude please understand, I am just stating my opinion and the fact that this fic affected me so deep tells a lot about your talent to capture the readers in your clutches! I started a creative writing class and our tutor advised us to be honest when reviewing and tell what I loved and what I didn't understand, so that the writer gets a new perspective and thinks under different angles. So I am trying to be objective. I thank you for updating and not abandoning this! A deep bow! Looking forward to more! Thanks?again!
Leaora (Chapter 14) - Thu 08 Jun 2017
Whoo!!! I finally finished re-reading all the previous chapters. This is one wild ride! Please update soon, so I can still remember what this story is about.
Hola , espero no te moleste que te deje esto en español. Me encanta tu historia, y sobretodo como manejas los personajes, me alegra saber que no esta abandonada la historia , cuidare mucho , espero poder leerte por acá muy pronto. Byyyyy
Ree-san (Chapter 14) - Wed 07 Jun 2017
I'm happy to see an update on the story. Kagome really needs to get help. If this type of work is so toxic, get a different job. She has to have some savings or make that sacrifice and stop school if it affects your mental health this way. I don't know why she is still clinging to Koga's bull crap as an example of love. Especially since Sesshomaru treated her a thousand times better, she still wants him to be more human while she remains the same. I think Sesshomaru should move on. It doesn't seem like she wants to help herself.
Yuri (Chapter 14) - Wed 07 Jun 2017
I feel like I haven't seen an update in so long, so o re-read this FF. I cried a lot lol please update more regularly
Nilee1 (Chapter 14) - Wed 07 Jun 2017
Wow -- didn't see any of that coming?
Omg. Ive waited so lomg for a chapter!!
I got up at 5:30 this morning,its currently 5:36 in the morning and I just read this. I was so excited!!
I love the story.....but why is Kagome giving Sesshomaru such a hard time!?!? He just wants to love her and she wants to refuse him. Maybe she needs to see her can move on too so SHE can finally fight for him
HOLY!!!!
I can't eveb begin to explain my excitement seeing a new chapter. Holy hell. I couldn't believe my eyes I had to do a double take to make sure I hadn't imagined it. Missed this piece SO MUCH it was wonderful seeing a new update, don't be a stranger!
Beautiful!!!!!!! I want more!!!!!
Bry (Chapter 13) - Sun 16 Oct 2016
I'm infatuated with this story I couldn't stop reading until it over. I will be paiently waiting for the next update!
Ive been waiting for an update... don't leave me hangin
How can they just let each other go !!!!! It's driving me nuts that neither will just confess how they really feel, no holds barred.
That being said, I NEED MORE!!!!!
Koree (Chapter 13) - Fri 02 Sep 2016
This story is f*****g amazing lol
Sparkle (Chapter 13) - Fri 02 Sep 2016
That chapter was so sad I wanted to cry. Great chapter.
Look forward to the next chapter.
Lorena (Chapter 13) - Thu 01 Sep 2016
Well damn... this story is too much! This angst is killing me, very rarely does a story make me want to smack some sense into Kagome, but for all her "relations" knowledge, you would think that she'd know that Sesshomaru's a novice to feelings. I'm not defending Sesshomaru of course, for all this attraction and potential romance, they don't really understand each other. I'd love for the best to occur, but i feel like somethings got to give si the these two can finally get their heads out of their ass' s, perhaps a baby?
Leaora (Chapter 13) - Wed 31 Aug 2016
I reread and damn if this doesn't tug at every heartstring! It may not be your passion project, but it is a masterpiece!
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