Oooo.... such interesting twists.  Can't wait to see what happens next! 

I like it! But fix the format lol. I got a little confused while reading. Update when you can :)

I love this so far and hope you update it soon as I'm sitting on pins and needles anticipating what will happen next. You captivated me from the description and I can't wait to see where you take this story!

Woah, great twist at the end.  I hope you update again soon.

I really love this story, can't wait til you update again.

wow Damn and he didn't even find out that shes pregnant.

You snatched my attention immediately...i'm looking forward to the remaining two chapters. I am not sure which I am hoping for... is he is able to get her back or looses it all for being fool enough not to be truthful with her... I am sure I will enjoy either outcome! Hope you post the last two chapters sooner rather than later :)

Wow a very powerful start... Can't wait to see how your story progresses.