I'm excited to see that you have a new story!
I enjoyed yes the opening chapter and setup. I look forward to seeing your resolution—though I'm torn between hoping he finds Kahome right away and hoping it takes him years. Either way, I hope she makes him work for it because any explanation he gives her (and how long it took for him to come looking) will sound like he wants/needs to keep using her.
Wow this was a turn i didn't see great chap looking forward to seeing more.
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