Reviews for Dirt by NiftyPaint24
clover_babe- Mon 05 May 2008
hmmmm. pancakes.
:D
hhaha. daaamn. this sounds like fun. bet Kaggie has a blast with so many boys 'round her.
XD
:D
hhaha. daaamn. this sounds like fun. bet Kaggie has a blast with so many boys 'round her.
XD
alissa- Mon 05 May 2008
oh i love it!!!! i ride with my friend jojo but im not that great right now but im getting better! im still working on a jump and landing without falling off! but i love the story! i hope you update soon!
nya- Mon 05 May 2008
Liking this a lot please update soon.
JustalilTwisted- Mon 05 May 2008
Well...I think this story is amazing! I love the detail and the idea is totally oringinal.
Just curious...do you ride? I only ride four-wheelers. My Mom won't let me get a bike...some nonsense about me and a broken back. [rolls eyes] No faith!
Any way...I love this story so far! Great job.
Just...one thing. You have a few spelling and grammatical errors. If you want, I'll be your beta and edit your chapters for you. Tell me if you are interested. I do have an account [under authors who have stories posted] I'm just too lazy to sign in.
Again...great job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Twisted [Formerly Sesshoumaru's Fiend]
Just curious...do you ride? I only ride four-wheelers. My Mom won't let me get a bike...some nonsense about me and a broken back. [rolls eyes] No faith!
Any way...I love this story so far! Great job.
Just...one thing. You have a few spelling and grammatical errors. If you want, I'll be your beta and edit your chapters for you. Tell me if you are interested. I do have an account [under authors who have stories posted] I'm just too lazy to sign in.
Again...great job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Twisted [Formerly Sesshoumaru's Fiend]
danny- Mon 05 May 2008
lol that was fun hope to see the next chapter
akia- Mon 05 May 2008
I like how this story is going. It's a good change in scenery. I cant wait for the next chapter.....so update soon.