I enjoyed that chapter greatly! I really wanted Sess to kiss her during the scene were she was mocking the girls. Oh, and I promise to my best to review more faithfully. I just published a fic and I have all these author alerts from the first chapter, but only 1 review. It's made me a faithful reviewer. XD
please update it's really interesting....
Kat- Fri 09 May 2008
i looked for the link on your profile... couldn't find it...
i wanna know what the shirt says :pouts: update soon
Jean- Thu 08 May 2008
Well, all went well at the tattoo parlor. I am anxious to know what is in Rin's journal.
fox fire- Tue 06 May 2008
please update soon this is really good.
Chloe Danielle- Mon 05 May 2008
GREAT STORY!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Chloe
One more thing I need to say that is of the utmost importance...*clears throat* PLEASE SEND SESSHOMARU AFTER ME!!!!!!
Chloe Danielle- Mon 05 May 2008
GREAT STORY!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Chloe
One more thing I need to say that is of the utmost importance...*clears throat* PLEASE SEND SESSHOMARU AFTER ME!!!!!!
Ok, so I sent you a message as well.
This story is wonderful. I am SO FRICKIN HAPPY that Sess is not the typical Armani-clad, snooty, limo-riding(honestly, does he really NEED a limo?) gazillionaire. I mean, sure, I have read many great stories with him portrayed this way, but your Sesshomaru is simply delicious. He's interesting, real, and still mysterious. Imagining the Taiyoukai as a tattoo artist wearing ratty Birks is hella sexy.
Keep it up! I need MORE! Oh, and I like how Kags hasn't just fallen into his waiting arms. He's gonna have to work through this new little obstacle of keeping his title and lands. Well done!
Amy
snowbird- Sun 04 May 2008
I just discovered this story and read the first 11 chapters straight through non-stop. I love it! It's different. I like different. Saiko needs to become Kagome's friend and help to get across to her that Sesshoumaru has changed. Kagome is being too stubborn mentally in not letting go of her past images of Sesshoumaru. She's not seriously stopping to think that over 500 years, a person can change. If she won't admit to herself, someone else needs to open her eyes for her and fast. You can only stay naive and foolish for so long. I guess it sounds like I'm getting a little frustrated with her shy, back-off attitude. Maybe let her overhear talk about how Sesshoumaru has waited for her all through the centuries. At least enough to get her to do some serious thinking. I just want her fully armed emotionally when Takeshi starts making his moves on her. I feel that he will, especially since he knows of Sesshoumaru's interest in her. They will be rivals not only for the Western Lands but also for her. It will have to be a short courtship, though, because like the Writ says, she has to be mated and pupped by the end of the next 4 months! I feel so sorry for Sesshoumaru. He's got his job cut out for him and a lot at stake. Now as for him being OOC. Balonie! As I said above, people change over time (especially centuries). You're affected by those around you, circumstances, and your environment. The reviewers that are grumbling about his being OOC are not letting themselves think rationally. He cannot remain the stoic, emotionless demon forever. Besides, he never was the emotionless demon that so many fans think. Just pay close attention while watching the anime and you will see plenty of emotion. It was just not as out in the open as Inuyasha's was. Not everyone goes around wearing their emotions on their sleeves. I could make a long (I mean long) list of emotions that I saw him quietly display. And that was just in the anime. Don't get me started on the manga. I guess it's about time I closed my review before it begins to look like a chapter! Until next time - keep the updates coming.
Jesaka Karanaka- Thu 01 May 2008
must. have. more.
Delightful. Sesshou playing fast and loose with the rules.....nummy.
newayz- Wed 30 Apr 2008
I love this story. The plot is too cute. Update like 3 chapters at a time to satisfy me please.
It's finally letting me do this! (I've been trying for about a day...arg). First off, I love your fic. I don't know if it tells you what chapter the reveiw is from, but I've read the whole thing. In one sitting. I think the idea is adorable and while the exectuion isn't beyond perfect, it still rocks big time. The people who send you notes saying how bad it is need lives- there are fanfics on this site and others that have only half the words spelt correctly that get awesome ratings, and great fics that get bad ratings, so don't let someone get you down.
I think your plot is very original and your story is creatively written. And married couples truly act like this- my parents do it all the time.
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Tue 29 Apr 2008
I'll tell you what I think. I think you need to post the next chapter as soon as possible.
The suspense is killing me!
OMG!!! u said that ur a bit new to writing but it seems like u've been writing forever because ur story is just amazing!!!!!! i love reading it so far and can't wait for more!!!! :)
TheMikoShivae- Mon 28 Apr 2008
this story is very addicting! i can't wait for more!
1Sesshy-Sama1- Mon 28 Apr 2008
I love this new Sessh. He's not too over the top, nore is he too mellow. I like how you made him move with the change of time. Like I said, it's not a major change, but enough to move with the time frame.
I enjoy this story very very much. I never thought I'd get so hooked! Please, please review soon! I'm waiting.3
al- Mon 28 Apr 2008
interesting cliff.
i look forward to reading more chapters,as they come about.
good luck.
zebbeed- Mon 28 Apr 2008
i am enjoying this so far but you may have cornered yourself... challenges for rule are very life and death... that there are other inu males with blood from the grand sire of sesh is most likely.. no title was held and males often had many female consorts... but it has been many, many years since the title has had meaning in the modern world... so the "uncle" must have thoughts about changing the world, or at least how demons view it.. a simple test of strength will not work at this time.... one must prove a value that is lacking in the current leader.... and events can be of great time lengths... months or years... are your youki of a political bend? an election by the assembled masses? or give a timed event.... sesh must marry and produce an heir within a given time.. and with kagome present at the challenge, will she wonder if sesh courting her is just to keep his title or does he truely care?...
MidnightStar- Tue 22 Apr 2008
Wonderful Story.....Keep writing.....:)
moniQ- Mon 21 Apr 2008
yayaya, lots fo chappies to read, nawww i like the new sessh, but i still wanna see a clobbering for inu.....
Moniq
ninjashinobu8890- Sun 20 Apr 2008
Holy crap!! That was quick in updating!! I enjoyed the new chapters you put up here. I can't wait to see happens next!!
ninjashinobu8890- Sun 20 Apr 2008
It's great so far. I love the concept. Can't wait to see the next chapter!!
Keep up the great work!!
craddock- Sat 19 Apr 2008
I love it
Aimee- Sat 19 Apr 2008
So far so good!
MissJess- Sat 19 Apr 2008
That was amazing! I just can't seem to get enough! I love how you captured Sesshomaru's personality exactly! And it doesn't seem too far fetched. It's as if Rumoiko wrote it herself! Bravo! And thank you!!!
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