This is an interesting way to tell a tale. I think this fic has potential. I wonder how differently things will be now that Sess and Inuyasha's roles are reversed? Will Inuyasha look down upon Sess cuz he's the son of a concubine?

It's a promising idea and I love the concept but the only thing I'll say is watch your wording. In the first part you have "coppery sent" when I think you meant "scent" and then there were some minor problems with missing letters but this is different and I love different...