Reviews for Out To Sea by Teh Smexii Dictator
Nene- Thu 03 Apr 2008
luuv it
Nene- Thu 03 Apr 2008
luuv it
FleetingDream- Thu 03 Apr 2008
Its interesting, some errors but it's a good idea. Don't take this wrong but this could be a lot better if you got a beta. Like I said before I like the idea, its fresh but a beta would help it flow more. Keep at it.
Ta~ta
Ta~ta
Marie- Thu 03 Apr 2008
WTF is this "coming soon" chapter?
What is the point of posting a second chapter if you're not going to write anything of substance?
What is the point of posting a second chapter if you're not going to write anything of substance?
alissa- Thu 03 Apr 2008
i love it!!! please update soon!