i giggled, i laughed...i think you succeeded in making it humourous....good job. i'm waiting for the update!
serasvictoria666- Thu 28 Feb 2008
| i really liked this first chapter and am looking forward to the next one. oh, and about writing how they got together, I'm thinking leap-frog. but hey, whatever you decide on is okay. I'll read it anyways. ^-^
me579- Wed 27 Feb 2008
| hurry and write another chap!!!!there short and simple!i usually write longer reveiws but its 10 at night and im feelin a lil lazy write now!!!!!!!anyway......another chap soon!!!!!!! ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness
| ooohhh!!! i really like what you have done so fare!!!
LifesChallenges- Wed 27 Feb 2008
| I think you should have them meeting up as another story entirly. Like a Prequel. But at times have a few flsah backs in the story ir you need them.
Vicious Grin- Wed 27 Feb 2008
leap-frog! leap-frog! LEAP-FROG!!!
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