Ah that was so mean! A cliffy the most unsatisfying type of chapter! grrr, still can't wait for more though!
:)
-FangedBeasty
Megan Consoer- Sat 03 May 2008
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
moni- Sat 03 May 2008
| NOOO fair it just gettin ggood!
Anjeliqua- Sat 03 May 2008
| I like the twist in plot. Well done
Sandy- Mon 14 Apr 2008
| you gotta hurry up and update
tabby- Sun 13 Jan 2008
| I love it o far adn i really hope you will write more and possibly send it to me....thx!! *smiles*
Kawaii_Kilala- Sat 29 Dec 2007
Nice begining, i must say. I didn't really think that a story named 'detention' would start with Kagome being a swearing girl, but i really think this story has promise, minus a few spelling errors or course. if you do not have a beta, you should get one, if you do, you should get another. there are some grammer errors, but not many. I wont give examples, because i am pressed for time, but i want to congradulat you on a well done first chapter, and wish you luck on continueing. Is this persoal experiance or made up? And i hope you had a wonderful Christmas and a happy New Year! i will try to at least review every toher chapter for you, and help you out, kay?
TTFN;
joanne
Chaos_Queen77- Sat 29 Dec 2007
hm... sounds interesting so far... keep upt he good work, pehaps some longer chapter... pLease!!!!
Chaos
Shiori_Baka- Sat 29 Dec 2007
| please update soon this is good and great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tami- Sat 29 Dec 2007
| when is the next chapter going to be up i absolutely love this story and its plot!!! You did a very good first chapter!!!
What?!!! Mean mean person you! *pout* It always happens when I like a story. It started by me running out of candy and now this? What's next? A giant elephant falling from the sky. *Gets crushed by an elephant and almost doesn't finish the review*
Very nice story so far, still you were mean by doing that! Please update soon? :)
:)
-FangedBeasty
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