That was beautiful!!!!!!! I just wish it wasn't a oneshot. It has a promise of being a fantastic plot for a story. During her travels, meeting up with them and gradually her friendship with Rin growing stronger and her feelings for Sesshoumaru growing deeper while his grows more confused until he has to finally be honest with himself. Please think about continuing this story. Please e-mail me and let me know your thoughts on this.

how cute!!! it was a perfect story to end my holiday on. I thought it was really cute and I would love it if you continued it but you said it was a oneshot so i guess I'm just shit out of luck, lol. can't wait to read another story from you so get a move on already!

Aww, this was so cute! I loved it, wonderfully done.

-FangedBeasty

Awww, that was so sweet. Thank You so much for that. I have been wondering when we were going to hear from you again. Now that I have; Merry Christmas to me.

Again, I cannot thank you enough for this most wonderful, special, thoughtful, UNIQUE gift. You are the greatest!!! And, I've noticed, others think so too. As I said before, you have a talent for writing and I am SOOOO looking forward to more of your work.

In the meantime, I hope your holidays are everything you hoped for and MORE. Keep smiling, pretty lady!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Very nice! Sweet, well-written, and I love that he used one of his hairs. I will be reading more of your work! Happy Holidays to you.

That was really beautiful! :)