Yo. I liked it! Cute in a dark way, you know? Any chance you'd consider making this into a two-shot?

If not, oh well. I just noticed you didn't have very many R's or R's, so I thought I'd attempt to help. ( :P Like I could really help. I think I'm just blowing smoke up my own ass...)

The only thing I noticed that detracted from the quality minutely is quite easy to fix: spelling. And it's all small stuff, like 'seen' instead of 'scene' and a few 'you' instead of 'your'. So kudos to you and your amazing vocabulary! Hopefully we'll hear from you again shortly!

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