hey bloodwitch this is so cool i'm diying to no wht happens next so please make the next chapter

Nice fiction, I really did enjoy reading it.

Now that last chapter was that ending before or after the Kagome part?

Well anyways, hurry and update real soon okay.

Ja Ne!

Sooo.... this is when I stopped reading this story...

(here is a pic of the shirt: http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t133/bloodymoonwitch/girl%20clothes/shirts/ST103147.jpg

That really just threw me....

UGH!!!! What a Bastard!! He Even Lied 2 Get Kagome 2 Trust Him! BOOOOOOOOOO!!!! (Laugh) Please Update As Soon As U Can!!

Kagome-Chan

dang...he's evil..poor sango!...update soon!

WHY!!!!!! OH GOD WHY DID U MAKE SESS. SUCH A CRUEL AND HEARTLESS MUTHERFUCKER!!!!!!!!! OMG!!! AND TO DO DAT TO SANGO!!!! HOW COULD U!!!!!!!!!!! horrible just horrible i dont no what else to say. :(

OMGSH! I love it. But i have a question. Why would she suddenly give in so easily to Sesshomaru even when she found out about Inuyasha, Sango, and Miroku's betrayal?

its not songo, its Sango

I love this story...but I think it is turning out to be a Inu/kag instead of Sess/Kag!! I don't know if you're doin this on purpose...I know how stories take on a life of their own. My stories are currently being rebelious and refusing to be motivated!! Anyway, another little peve is...why the heck is Kagome so dumb??!! Rebelious is one thing...being plain out stupid is another!! How hard is to remember to get home before it's dark...and I still can't figure how she lost control of the car after she dodged Sesshomaru in the middle of the road....Another little scene of stupidity...running outside in an alley by yourself, knowing a serial killer is after you...That shows a lot of intelligence... I like your story...but I hate your take on Kagome...she's needs to think for once in this entire story..She's an insult to the modern woman!! Sorry just I had to say that!! This is not a flame..just a little push...and my opinion.

Oh Dear. I Wonder What Kind of Revenge He Wants? Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!! And If It's Possible, Please Try 2 Make Longer Chapters!! Thanks!

Kagome-Chan C:

OMFG!!!!!!!!plzplzplz hurry and write another chap im dyin wit out another hurry hurry hurry!!!!!!!!!!!! ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

this is one of my favorite vamp fics so for keep up the good work

this is sooooo mean how can you leave us hanging like that ? Please don't take to long to update

pleasse write more

this is really good can u please write more i am diying to know wht happen so please write more

i love it!!!!!!

FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY KEEP GOING ....DONT STOP MUST HAVE MORE....
TTFN Marrosa

I am an avid vamp freak so of course I love the fic, but it does have some misspellings in it. I am looking forward to the next chapter. if u can will you alert me when you post? tilayha

Ok, They Have Wings and They Aren't Human. So....What ARE They? I Can't Really Figure It Out. Anyway, Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

ok i so in love with the fic i like to read the other one u got the idea from to there are not enough vampire fic and i really hope u keep up the good work TTFN Marrosa
u can email me when u update and if u get that other fic too @ princess_marrosa@yahoo.com

i am i love with this story so please oh mighty god please write more. and by the way why do you always leave off on the good parts. oh and it wouldn't hurt to write more in the chapters.....lol
~Tanya~

Oh No!!!! Sesshomaru REALLY Needs 2 Stop Hurting Her!! But Who Pushed Her Out of the Way of the Truck? Was It Sesshomaru? Hmmmm....IDK. Please Update As Soon As U Can!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

konnichiwa!! i congratulate you this story is awesome and i so like the way that you portray sesshou as a vamp HAWT vamp anyways i really hope you update soon...
sincerely,
Amaya-Chan

konnichiwa!! i congratulate you this story is awesome and i so like the way that you portray sesshou as a vamp HAWT vamp anyways i really hope you update soon...
sincerely,
Amaya-Chan

Oooh I think Kagome will be taught a lesson by her future-husband..hopefully (prays for lemons!)

Awesome chapter!! Keep it up! ^_^

holy shit!!....please update soon!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

*eyes bug out*

damn it, damn it, damn it!!! I hate cliffies!!!!

oh this is so exciting plz makde the next chapter

o0o0 Spooky! Please Update Soon!!!! I REALLY Wanna Know What Happens!!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

have sesshomaru seduse her more

Keep going ^_^

update soon!

wow cool!

I Really Liked These 2 Chapters But It's Kinda Hard 2 Read w. All the Mispelled Words. Please Edit Some of These Out 4 the Next Chapter. With That Said Though....I LOVE This Story! It's Getting Stickier w. Every Chapter!!!! Please Update Soon!!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

LOVED IT!!!!

IT WAS UTTERLY AMAZING!!!! ^_^


PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU =D


LEMONS PWEEZ ^^

OOO! thats an attention grabber. Hm... could the evil parents actualy have something that could help her? Dun dun dun!!! And the plot thickens.

chaos

*jaw hits floor & eyes bug*
O.O
Well, I didn't see that coming...

ahhhhhh cliffhanger again?!?!?!?!
EVIL INCARNATE!

i want to knowwwwwww

oh oh you you you suck suck suck. How can you leave me hanging like this, I mean I think I know what he wants but you might add a twist and then you just stop. your cruel and inhuman?. ~sheds a few tears~ you better post soon. because the suspence will kill me. LOL

hugs and puppies

pls update,,,,,,, I love this fic pls,,,

this is really really good keep it up

this is really really good keep it up

.....?

Dare YOUUUUU!!!
Great!!!

Bye,
faby

please!

update soon!

u are so evil i can't believe fluffy thrented te ppl poor wolf but please update soon tada it gettin really good

Cliffie I no likey!

Bad Cliffie BAD CLIFFIE!!!! (Laugh) JK I LOVED This Chapter!! So Suspencful! (Or However U Spell That....) Anyway, Please Update Soon!!!! Thanks!!

Chu!

Kagome-Chan ♪

oh you are bad and let me hang the story was getting real good and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story. up date soom.

NNNNNOOOOOOOOO! YOU ARE SO EVIL!! A MOST INTERESTING TWIST!

damn you!...

why leave it on a cliffy!...

love this story plz write more soon.

What a crummy way to leave off a chapter with a cliffy, *Points finger* you meany!!! *Pouts in corner*

Chaos

I loved it So when is he going to kidnap her?

awesome story! I can't wait for the next installment. could you send me an e-mail when you update next please?

love the story its hot nice lime there but anyways what is this story based on i would like to know the name of it if you don't mind well please write more your doing an amazing job im so looking forward to what happens next i think its awesome so far so keep it up let us know when you update next

thanks take care Ja ne!

LordSesshomaruLover16

Sweet! But what does it mean that she's connected to Sessoumaru? Is he the reason for the dreams? How come she didn't question her friends further about not being human?And how the HELL do they know Sesshoumaru?!?! Ahem, sorry bout that, anyhow, I eagerly await the next chapter blood! See yah then, and thanks for the heads up! Ja!!

That was an AWESOME CHAPTER!!!

Love the lime and I must say, I think Inuyasha's character is perfect ^_^

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOUU ^_^

P.S. lemons pwez =D

this is so fucking awsome!!! i lov it i want more :)

WOW! That keeped me on the edge of my seat!

Yes, please to the update!! I really, really, REALLY wanna find out where this GOES! Please update as soon as you can! Luv yah!

i totally love the story and i can't wait until you write some more and can you send me an e-mail to tell me when the next chapter comes out

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Woa, GR8 Story So Far!!!! PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!! If Possible, Could U Just Message Me When a New Chapter Is Up? Thanks!

Peace, Luv, and Vampires,

Kagome-Chan ♥

i would totally like to know when you update this fic

I really love this story, I love a good vampire story, so please take your time. and email me when you update.
qianawright@aol.com

omfg!!!...what going to happen next!!!...why does inu know him..are they still brothers!!..tell me!!!..more chapters please!!1

Please continue soon byebye

i really like the story and im glad you didnt try to end the story really quickly. if you could can you email me when you update it would save me a lot of time thanks!!!

I vote that he disapears with her.... and changes her.....

Yay! Another chapter! *sigh* Please update soon! And if you could, please email me at dark_jackal_goddess@yahoo.com or at holy_falcon_god@yahoo.com
Thank you soooo much!! Keep up the good work!! See yah, and take care olweiz!!

Oh! And pleeease continue this story!! Don't stop now!!!! Its SOO good!!! =)

This story is SOO GOOD!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I would love it if you would e-mail me when u have the next update....thank you!

Cant wait for the lemons and all the sexual tention! I wanna noe wat Sesshomaru will do to Kagome?

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!!!!!!! ^_^
A

keep going ^_^

keep going ^_^

i really enjoy this story, please update soon

what is she an idot!!!...why would dhe do that?...but dont really blame her..damn sesshy is fucken hot!!!...even as a killer...more chapters please...

Please update soon ^_^

Please update soon ^_^

please E mail me when update this it is reall reallywwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnddddddddddddddddeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuullllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So yeah update

I hope so....i am dying to know if Sesshomaru will kidnap Kagome and well, this is where a lemon comes in play! =)

PLEEEEEEEASE up-date fast!!! ^_^

p.s. LEMONS PWWEEZ

Oi! I bloody hate you! How could you? *sniff* ^_^ heheheh, Just kiddin'!

I know how hard it is to think up of stories, plots and all that and I sympathize with you, I really do! Coz I had an english writing class during this spring and believe me, i took 4 hours just trying to finish a 4 page story! And that's already with a rough draft! So anywei, me and my brother are rooting for you, and hope that you can update as soon as possible! Ja ne!! and take care!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

please write more you really have a good story...

oh and you know that you have a repat on ch 5

Wow, please write more! i love it!!! Update soon!!

this story is SO hot and amazing!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!! ^_^


P.S. lemons pwezz

Keep going ^_^

Keep going ^_^

Keep going ^_^

Your doing a very good job on this.Keep up the good work.Plz update soon.I just can't wait until your next chapter

i think i know what she saw but I still CANT wait for the next chapter!!

PLEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE N THANK YOU!! ^_^

P.S. lemons pweez

Nice little cliffie there at thee end. It looks like a good beginning. And that shirt was GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!

please write more

i love this story please update soon

keep going ^_^

keep going ^_^

keep goingb^_^

get ur freak on!!

Sounds sweet! Vampires rule!!!! And I think Sesshy-sama will make a good one. Can't wait for the first chappie! Oh, and to whatever retard who went and rated the story, pardon my french, but you're a f****** retard!! OMG, the story hasn't even been posted and you had to go and rate it!!! Now, the rating will be lowered no matter how good tthe story is, it'll be lowe\r than it should have been, all because some ass had to be all cocky and rate it without reading it! Sorry about the little rant, but tat really pissed me off! I mean, now even if everybody rates it 10 out of 10, the rating will still be lowered! Grrr
Anywho, the story sounds cool, get the first chappie up ASAP!!!!

update soon ^_^

update soon ^_^

Please continue when you have the time Byebye

please write more it sounds really good.

please write more it sounds really good.

wow. can't wait, sounds good...never read that other story though...but i love vampires^_^