Ooc: Yeah, I have to admit I was in a hurry when I editted the story, and I know it's out of character, oh wellXD

I actually like this story. I'm really hooked now! What happens to a pregnant woman in a coma if she never wakes up, though? Does she automatically have a c-section at the end of her nine months? Anyway, you've got lots of punctuation and dialouge errors, but I guess I can get over them. Your plot is really interesting. Your characterization of Sesshy is questionable, but better than many I have seen. Kagome, although seen only in the first chapter, seemed to be herself. The Narkau/Kagura and Kanna spin is a bit weird, but it works.

I actually like this story. I'm really hooked now! What happens to a pregnant woman in a coma if she never wakes up, though? Does she automatically have a c-section at the end of her nine months? Anyway, you've got lots of punctuation and dialouge errors, but I guess I can get over them. Your plot is really interesting. Your characterization of Sesshy is questionable, but better than many I have seen. Kagome, although seen only in the first chapter, seemed to be herself. The Narkau/Kagura and Kanna spin is a bit weird, but it works.

so sad...more chapters please!!

poor sess..so sad...more chapters please!!

This story is so awesome! Update soon! Peace.

I seriously love your story. There were a few punctuation errors, but nothing major. I can't wait until your next update.
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-VG-

i relly was about to cry but i love the story

I LOVE this story!! (I think I sent a review earlier but I dont think it posted... damn internet >.)

BUT KEEP IT UP!!!

PLZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE I SO LIKE THE STORY