I am only on Chapter One... and it seems intriguing so far, so I will keep trying to read. I only hope that later chapters are formatted better (each time a new person speaks, it goes on a new line) and that you don't put authors notes in the middle of the story (instead of saying, *Just then, Rin walked in with a navy blue maids outfit (Kinda looks like the outfit Sango wears)* you could say "Just then, Rin walked in with a navy kimono, much like the clothing Sango wore..."

Anyway, just hope I am helping. ^_^ I know that some people refuse to read fics that have not been formatted properly. i am usually among them. Just for speech it is especially annoying because the speaker can be easily confused.

Did she wish that the baby was Sesshoumarus? ... What did Sessh wish and what did Kagome wish? Amanda.