| beautifully written.
Angelofdarkness_1255- Wed 02 May 2007
| hey please make another chapter it can be the last one i don't care just please make a sequal :)
Angelofdarkness_1255- Wed 02 May 2007
| hey please make another chapter it can be the last one i don't care just please make a sequal :)
Angelofdarkness_1255- Wed 02 May 2007
| hey please make another chapter it can be the last one i don't care just please make a sequal
Phoenix Wolf- Sun 29 Apr 2007
| I like you story so far. Could use some more details, but then I realized this was how it was supposed to be written, I still like it and I can't wait for you to post the next two chapters to see what happens. And what happenes to him.
Kimmy-chan- Sat 28 Apr 2007
| OMG!!!! Write a sequel 'cause this story is totally awesome. And you can't just leave it as a cliffhanger type of story. It's too god damn interesting. Please write a sequel!!
Jasmine- Sat 28 Apr 2007
| THAT WAS GOOD WHATS NEXT? THEIR IS A NEXT RIGHT?
judzea- Sat 28 Apr 2007
Oh, you must finish this story. You've got my interest and I want to read more.
Nice start to a possibly good story.
Update soon :-)
blkwolf1- Sat 28 Apr 2007
| Hey your story is really good!! hope 2 c the sequel soon!!!
alatera- Sat 28 Apr 2007
| Its very vague . It stands on its own , has a beginning and an ending( final decision possibly). But its bare bones( so to speak, needs more to flesh it out, even if its more parts( like other one-shots like you said))..Hopefully with all the one-shots it will be more complete and understandable. Otherwise its very interesting and makes you really want more of the story .
jazz- Sat 28 Apr 2007
| good. please do sequel
Asian Gurl- Sat 28 Apr 2007
| Please make a sequel! This is very good!
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