Reviews for The Beach House by Kanai

UtterChaos247- Tue 19 Feb 2008
that was aweesome, u should make it a story, tell me if u do!!!!

Darlene- Wed 06 Feb 2008
it was really good. u should continue it as a story.then it would be awesome.

Tomato- Thu 08 Nov 2007
continue this story plz!! love it.

sessysbaby666- Wed 19 Sep 2007
if you haven't already you need to write a sequeal.

Nanami Hikari- Sun 12 Aug 2007
Yes YES YES!!! Please continue!

Physical Graffiti- Thu 12 Jul 2007
Very sexy I loved I hope you add on to this I liked the way Kagome acts in this fic.

kagomebabygirl- Tue 12 Jun 2007
please, please continue

kagomebabygirl- Tue 12 Jun 2007
please, please continue

Tomato- Tue 15 May 2007
i like this story!! plz continue it!

Tomato- Tue 15 May 2007
i like this story!! plz continue it!

ElegantPaws- Tue 03 Apr 2007
This merits continuation.

inugoddsschild- Sun 25 Feb 2007
You must make an epilogue of the wife finding out. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I soooo luv it


jestergirl- Sat 24 Feb 2007
OMG, i loved this story, please can you continue it, it would make a good fanfiction with about 12 chapters. LOL that was good.

Dark Fang 1990- Sat 24 Feb 2007
How the heck is this an appropriate Sess/Kagome oneshot tell me???? In most oneshots they end up together or are mentioned if one dies or something. Yet you leave him married to that made up character that dose not deserve him. I am sorry but this oneshot it dose not work that is the ending doesn't. I mean not to be rude or anything but you should have had him diss his wife for Kagome at least in the end. I get what you mean by the ending you wrote but that was just not particle It leaves readers feeling like that was a waist of time ...its like what your just going to leave it there well hes still with some other women that doesn't leave as much as you think to the imagination > thats my problem other then that it was writen out well. The ending was not good. sorry but I don't think highly of your choice of ending. Its enough to make some Sess/Kagome fan go yuck at the ending. I have read the majority of stories on here so this I gess is just one of those endings but I think it kina crosses the line.That the only reason I am wrighting a review at 1:31 in the morning.

Dark Fang 1990- Sat 24 Feb 2007
How the heck is this an appropriate Sess/Kagome oneshot tell me???? In most oneshots they end up together or are mentioned if one dies or something. Yet you leave him married to that made up character that dose not deserve him. I am sorry but this oneshot it dose not work that is the ending doesn't. I mean not to be rude or anything but you should have had him diss his wife for Kagome at least in the end. I get what you mean by the ending you wrote but that was just not particle It leaves readers feeling like that was a waist of time ...its like what your just going to leave it there well hes still with some other women that doesn't leave as much as you think to the imagination > thats my problem other then that it was writen out well. The ending was not good. sorry but I don't think highly of your choice of ending. Its enough to make some Sess/Kagome fan go yuck at the ending. I have read the majority of stories on here so this I gess is just one of those endings but I think it kina crosses the line.That the only reason I am wrighting a review at 1:31 in the morning.

Pontas-Metallika- Sat 24 Feb 2007
Continue! Damnit, CONTINUE xD

Dark topaz- Fri 23 Feb 2007
continue it sounds good

Sess' Sakura- Fri 23 Feb 2007
MMMM Delicious, That was great!!!
I think you should continue it. Anyway great job hope to here from you again.
Sakura

black moon inu- Fri 23 Feb 2007
You have to do more that was great and I have to know if he ends up fallowing her.

Define-Naughty- Fri 23 Feb 2007
You so have to continue this! I love it!! Plz, Plz continue!!

swtdrm01- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I loved it. The fact that he is already married is a bummer, but I loved the story. You did a great job.

SesshomaruCrazy- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I liked this story.. One =Shot..
I think you should continue it.. I could be a really interesting story..
Not that I agree with them having the affair but hey shit hapens right..
I would surley continue to read it if you wrote more...
Nice lemons and limes in there too..
Well take care and by the way i like the maids Name..
Same as MNE..
Mari

alatera- Fri 23 Feb 2007
Very interesting! Short but sweet and with plenty of potential for more. Interesting things she said to him too. Would be interested to read more if you wrote it. Her point of view after she left. His the next day waking next to his wife instead of her. Who would seek out the other first? Where? Could it have been a little planned? Lots of things crossed my mind. Good job!

Rea- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I liked this one-shot. I'd LOVE to see more of it as a story. If you continue it, you'll have me as a dedicated reviewer!

bluemoon_175- Fri 23 Feb 2007
*smiles* That was a fantastic story and I would love to see you write more.

Kags21- Fri 23 Feb 2007
That was hot pllease continue

TinkerBell- Fri 23 Feb 2007
you should make this 'One shot' into a story!!!!

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