| nice story me like plz update
       
Kaori- Sat 10 Feb 2007 
| yeah. it's me, but i'm too lazy to actually log in. this is a pretty good story thus far. you got a few typos, but they don't distract from the story horribly. you read enough of theseto know what i mean. i like it, though.
       
										
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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