i love your story . great job of writing it

countue writing this i like plz u really good

Cool. Although it is SUPER short it is really cool the format and plot you are using are really cool and original

first let me say as constructive crtisism ment to be taken in the most non negative way possible by you the way your story is set up is a little strange the lines serve no purpose that the spaces can't convine.Second the begining is a little vague but still informative. But I do like the Idea and so far it is quite interesting I hope you don't think me rude for voicing such opinions on your work.Keep writing it though because I believe it will becaome a very good thrilling story that challenges everyone to think about something.

I nEvEr HavE tHinK oF tHat...KagoMe

diEd, TuRneD Into A Kami And InU

no TaShO In ThE Fic. UpdAte

WWTF see You

hmm. this sounds really interesting!IN FACT, i don't believe i've ever heard of such a storyline. i would LOVE to see how this story progresses. update soon!