Awesome..I am a lost for words!! That was amazingly betrayed!! I read both of your poems and this one brought me to tears!! Keep it up!!

meaby you should make the poem a story of how they should be toghether

That was the best poem on any fanfiction site I have ever read. It blew me away when I first read it...wow. This is a wonderful, wonderful piece of poetry. I bow to your greatness.