well, i like it!

Good Story Me Likey! Update Soon!

That what he gets for ditching his brother. LOL though I would have ditched him to. poor inu nobody cares. Well hope you post more soon.

hugs and puppies

thats it... what .... no.. update !!!!

it sounds good can you write more pleace

hEy lEt Me Guess aBout The aRrow

KagoMe ShooT iT rIght? WelL

aNyWays PLeaSe upDaTe fAsTer!!

I'm sorry to say that my fav line from the first chap was" Mr......Puff Puff." I cracked up I thought I was going to pee my pants. The second chap. wasn't as funny but still good. post soon. If you could give me a heads up when you do thank you.

Ok not being mean, but a horse can't slow down to a gallop because a gallop is full speed for a horse. from slowest to fastest is walk, trot, canter, gallop. Sorry but I own horses and I am sort of a freak when it comes to things like that. Other then that I love it!!

please update pretty please bores here, so please

Woow Killing i'll call you that god if i could write as good as you i'd be rich good fic love it write more soon