I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I love this movie. i think it is a great idea for sess/kag. Please contiune.

I really like the whole idea of the story but i think u should really fixs the spelling of the story.Iam really looking forward for the next charter.

Hmm, I actually really like this. I was alittle skeptical at first because The Crow is one of my favorite movies, but this is turning out really well. I just think you need to pay a little more attention to your grammar, but other than that it's awesome.

Hah, I was honestly waiting for someone to do a take on the Crow. But please tell me you aren't going to take from the exact script (although you pretty much did in this chapter)... I dunno, I guess I'll find out in the later chapters.

this is really cool i like it

Hi,
you should place a disclaimer. 'the crow' was your inspiration source.

CM