| hope to read more chappiues soon causei really want to know whats gonna happen next
Lady Symoné- Sat 21 Apr 2007
| Wow! This is one of the best citrus one-shots I have ever read! It is beautifully crafted and flows so well. Keep up the good work!
“Lay? Why you speak in a future tense, I’ve already laid my hands on her, dear brother.â€Â
Has to be your best line lol! I love it.
jess- Sat 25 Nov 2006
| loved your story ^-^!!
elsy- Mon 23 Oct 2006
| write another one like this one but make it more than a one--shot. see ya!!!!
AccidentalGoddess- Fri 29 Sep 2006
| I don't know why you say you're not the best writer, that was a wonderful peice. Very well put together. You could even expand it into a full fic if you wanted. Actually, I think I'd like to see that, though I know you're working on When Everything Falls Apart right now...but something to think about for the future. ;)
Vanessa- Tue 11 Jul 2006
| Hey! You might be new to the whole InuYasha fanfic world but you sure do one hell of a good job. Your story was great! I enjoyed reading it. I hope you keep writing stories because you have a great talent.
orchid- Mon 10 Jul 2006
| loved it... will we be seeing more.. update soon if it's a yes.. thanks
Lady Kio-tye- Mon 10 Jul 2006
| Your one hell of a write. This is so good. I'm not sure it you are going to continue it or do another, but I would love to read more!! So please do keep writing!!! ^_^
Something-or-other- Mon 10 Jul 2006
| Wow. What an awesome story. You really did a great job on this songfic. It was just perfect. Wow. Hoobastank's "Inside of You" was just a perfect song. Really, keep up the great work.
Megan Consoer- Mon 10 Jul 2006
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| I absolutely loved it!!!!
moonshinegirl- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| i like this story no i love and i was wondering if could make it not a one shot . i love your writing please
| This was an awesome song fic i loved it. who is the artist of the song?
Dark Seduction102- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| I liked this story alot I was wondering if you could make it more than a one-shot.Oh and you write just fine to me.
Dark Seduction102- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| I liked this story alot I was wonderng if you could make it more than a one-shot.Oh and you write just fine to me.
WhiteRose-Kurama- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| This was amazing for ur first fic! Is there more to come? I can't wait to read what happens next so keep up the good work:P
Kags21- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| That was very good for your first fic. I hope you write more soon
kagome15- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| GREAT STORY!! please make a new chapter ASAP!!!
| VEEEERy good!! Liked it!
Roanae- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| great story, in fact i was listening to the song while reading, keep up the good work.
bluemoon_175- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| Your story was really good, keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more of your future stories.
Very nicely done.. I enjoyed reading it... You plan one making this a one - shot or are you going to continue... It has alot that can go on with the story...
I hope you write more because i enjoy it...
Thanks
Mari
Britt- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| your writting is fantastic, please write more in the future, you have a great talent.
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