I loved it! Even though it was very sad. This kind of work shows what a good writer you are and how you can write different types of stories and still maintain your your style of writing. I hope you continue writing fanfiction you are a great writer.

that was truly touching.

so sweet.

damnit! i shouldn't have read this after Suffocation, but it really was good, even though im STILL crying... your stories are great! and I hope you do more, also I will be rading underdeep on here instead of AFF for now...

I always hate and love sad stories. They're always so beautiful and I always feel more emotions for the characters in stories than I do in real life. This was one of those stories.

Wow...I liked this story...it's so beautiful...