| very nice loved the stroy line
JustAnotherPrettyFace/3- Sat 17 Mar 2007
| HEY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! i love it, read it all in one day all 11 chapters lol, thats saying alot lol, keep it up, i'll be looking forward to reading another chapter from you 3 lol but, i do have one thing non nice to say, and it aint that bad, I'd like to be your beta reader, I see a few things that could be fixed up, make it a full 100 out of 10, I'v been reading for a while , few years, and writing a few extra more years(since I was like, 6 or 7) and I'd love to help you, I'm good at lemons, I can spell and gramer good as long its not msn or emails, or stuff. storys always have to be top spelling for me, and i see a few words you left out by accident, and a few added ones that make no sence. I need a beta for my storys because, when you write the story, you wont see the mistake most of the time. So, yah, sorry if i offended you, I love the story over all 3 lol mail me back if youd like me to help you =]
inugirl31- Tue 06 Mar 2007
| please hurry up with an update, I just love this story, and u just stopped in the middle of a lemon. SO so hurry and write more really really soon
| oh wow please hurry up with an update, i love where this is going and the fact that u stopped in the middle of a lemon was just evil!
| oooo there's more to come right? its been a while since the last update :) i can't wait :)
marcia- Sun 17 Dec 2006
| Great story you should finish it sometime
raven666vs777- Sun 10 Sep 2006
| this story was great i love the lemon trust me it was great i mean ahhh? lol update soon plz!!
Tori- Thu 06 Jul 2006
| Dark, lustful, senusal, all wrapped into one. From the time I began to read it the story started off strong, I love Sess and kagome together. I like seeing Sess all primal and Domiante over Kagome. I like how you have contunious Sex scecns. Keep it up!!! it's going great. Oh I like how you have kagome but I have a request if it's alright? Could you have Kagome Defy Sess, and really let him punish her with sex, and more sex. *sorry hentai mind runs away.* But I like the story and I can't wait for more.
night's perfection- Thu 15 Jun 2006
| This story is intense!!! That has to be one of the best lemons I ever read and trust me when I sat that I have read a lot of them. PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
moonshinegirl- Sat 27 May 2006
| this the best fanfic ever! tell me will kykio be involve in htis story
pooh- Sat 20 May 2006
| all i cna really say is one ord, "whoa" please update again soon.
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