An illustration of the first scene of my fic, The Light at the End (Rated MA for lemons, so no minors, please!). I'm not sure whether or not I'll finish it -- the poses are stilted and awkward, because my anatomy sucks, yo. Does anyone have advice on improving it? Or can you pinpoint where I'm going wrong?

Thanks! ::goes back to not being an artist:: 

28.05.2012 21:39:05 

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