Lol! You have some of the most brilliant lines I've ever seen! :
“Well, when you say it that way it sounds stupid. In my head it’s perfectly reasonable.” I love the way Sess handled her insecurities...
“He opened the door a crack to me, and I smashed through the window."
“You mean like I sleep here and wake up really early and sneak back to the guest house so no one hates me?”
“Mmm…warm, naked man.”
“Good god, your feet are cold,” he said and put his arms around her.
“Is that a polite way of saying I have a flat chest and a fat ass?”
“Sango told me about the breast fetishist. Clearly delusional.” (Lol)
Kagome froze for a long second and started to get up. “I’ll be right back. I need to go kill Sango.”
“You’re a very cute hypocrite.”
“I love you, Kagome.” !!!!!!!!! Wehuu! Just because they finally said it!
His statement simultaneously shocked, delighted, and scared the piss out of her.
His gravid pause made her teeth chatter in expectation.
“When did you turn into such a toothless old man?”
“It’s like an amusement park thrill ride that I get to control.”
Kinda like detonating a bomb to move some furniture, but damn that was fun.”
“Better than sex.”
“Gee, thanks.” He didn’t realize it was possible to be jealous of a car.
She looked at him with a naughty grin. “Wanna have sex in the backseat?”
“You find the risk of getting caught a turn-on.”
“No, actually. I’m trying not to think about it at all.”
“You’re objectifying me, aren’t you?”
“Of course not, Mr. Perfect Car. Now stop talking. Or make some kind of engine revving noise.”
So sorry to fill my review with your lines but damn! I just had to.. Your writing is amazing and when this story is finished (by the way I want this to be a neverending story ;P) I'm gonna print it out and keep it forever and ever!
marus_tenshi (Chapter 33) - Thu 06 May 2010
i love this story whats next for these two? would you like to work on a story with me?
Yay another great chapter!!! Thank you very much!!
Oh i'm sooooo glad Sessh's parents seem to really like Kagome and seem fine with the fact that there may be more going on between those then they thought! But i still can't wait to see what happens if that guy does indeed write that stupid book of his! But i am glad Kagome is trying to trust in Sesshomaru, and i thought their little 'i love you' scene was cute!!
Keep up the awesome job, as i eagerly await the next chapters!!
awwww....i really liked the way sesshoumaru handled kagome's insecurities XD
it was really romantic when he palyed for her and i'm glad the taishos have nothing against their relationship C:
I'm happy that mr taisho realized that he has to adress his issues with sesshoumaru as well and not go on with the ingore and live on tactic ;)
i really really do hope you won't have our love birds been seens by their afternoon activities, as i think that both deserve a tiny bit of peice before kagura or other members of the better society get the info that sesshoumaru is taken...
great chapter like always...and like always PLEASE UPDATE SOON
y? (Chapter 33) - Thu 06 May 2010
I love your work. My only complaint is that I can never get enough of it!
Ambra (Chapter 33) - Thu 06 May 2010
I'm almost in tears for all the emotions you poured inside this chapter.
Truly marvellous, from the rescue of Kagome, Sesshomaru playing, his parents silently approving, the three magical words reciprocated to the biggest trust, the BMW. ;)
Your characters, though different form the show, reflect a lot of the original personalities... your story is so amazing to read!
Congratulations!
Valerie (Chapter 33) - Thu 06 May 2010
Love it! I like how the Taisho's start to understand that somethings happen for a reason and even 20 + years later an apology is still welcome to people. I really like the fact that they are soo exepting of their sons reationship, Sesshoumaru playing the piano for kagome is a ingenius way to get her trust; I certainly wouldn't have thought that. I hope you update really soon!!!!
loveyaa (Chapter 33) - Thu 06 May 2010
My whole day just get a tad but brighter when I realize that you have updated and not that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are together and gotten the I Love Yous out of the way Im basically walking on sunshine. Im just trying to enjoy it will i can since I have a feeling that something will come up. Til next time hoping that they stay on cloud 9 if they don't getter higher :)
YAY their in love!!!! And holy fishsticks that was hawt!!!!!! Awesome job and I'm so glad you updated!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Ohhh, but I ADORE exceeding the posted speed limit in a machine equipped to do so!! It is one of the few guilty pleasures I still indulge in. I loved the way you described Kag's adventure in the sexy, mean machine! In fact, as always, I love this chapter in its entirety... and it was PERFECT. Srsly. Absolute PERFECTION... spelling, grammar, diction... PERFECT!!!!!!!!!! My apologies, but I'm so glad that you had all this time to do so much research on this chapter, regardless of whether or not it was superfluous - still, I AM sorry that poor Gryphon was the reason you had all that time. Thank you so much for taking me away from my existence for the time I spent reading. It was GLORIOUS... and they BOTH said the "L" word!!!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!
:D
~~me~~
REDWOLF (Chapter 33) - Wed 05 May 2010
What a chapter....I need to turn the ac on and get a cool drink. This was wild. Fantastic fic!
Kurai (Chapter 33) - Wed 05 May 2010
I get so excited and happy to see that you updated!
hi,
good chapter...it was well done...it will be interesting to see how things progress...
good job and update soon...
Spennig (Chapter 33) - Wed 05 May 2010
I'm impressed. I've had tears in my eyes from riding the coaster of humor, joy, pain and fear that you've had woven so well in this. I hope to see it continue and grow. I enjoy your writing style, and how this story has progressed.
BluMystique (Chapter 33) - Wed 05 May 2010
After 3 weeks...(yes I checked multiple times a day) this chapter was simply perfect! I think I'm in love. See you in another 3 weeks
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