Nice work.
This was amazing, I love your writing style. So glad they found Yasha. I love how Souta was lifted by Sess, haha! He seemed a little upset until he found out he was Kagome's brother. He can't have any competition now can he, haha! Not like anyone could compare to smexy Sesshy:)
Glad inu alive and monk is getting better.
Pamela (Chapter 14) - Wed 30 Dec 2015
Hooray! I love it when you are on a roll! Great chapters. Love that Sess broke down and told Kagome and that she is making him work for it and secretly he doesn't mind one bit:) yeah! Inuyasha is ok and Miroku too.
Mona (Chapter 14) - Tue 29 Dec 2015
I wonder what Inuyasha's gift is, being full demon? Or being able to control his demon half? Or neither?
Pamela (Chapter 13) - Tue 29 Dec 2015
Another awesome chapter you are definitely on a roll:) love how you portray Kagome as strong. And Sango is so cute to try and fit in her old slayer's outfit after kids. Been there done that, haha!
Poor Sango, a least he has good news for her!
Yes I like this strong kagome. Am also in love with the general. Like him a lot. Please sango so worried for her monk. This whole story rocks good work can't wait to see more.
Oh boy...this is bad. I wonder if Sess will be there in time?
Really good chapter! Poor Souta and her family. Okay grammar Nazi moment, your beta hasn't caught this; borders are political boundaries of countries, regions and states( Texas and Oklahoma share a border); boarders are people who rent a room or rooms in a house (her boarder's were late with their rent). Sounds alike but are two different things. Sorry, stepping off the box now.
Happy holidays
Oh no! Terrible news!!
Curiouser and curiouser...
Really liking this story so far. Cheers!
Hmmm, methinks that there is more to be in alpha female than is being divulged.
Great chapter! Oh, Yasha isn't going to like this.
Interesting start and looking forward to more.. Watch those run on sentences though. I was out of breath reading about Fa. Whew!
Hmmm, interesting... Souta may have spiritual powers too maybe? Thanks for the update!
Great so far
Hmmm.......if these "children" of Naraku are killed in the Feudal Era, then Kagome's family won't be slaughtered. But since at least one survived.........what a situation!!! Can't wait to read more! Thanks!
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