Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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Selenityhyperion (Chapter 3) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

Okay I sort of feel sorry for Akemi but it's not like he actually loves her! She wouldn't be anything to him if it were not for that stupid prearranged marriage agreement!

 

I really hope Kagome just tells him to leave her alone and not come back... that way he will have to wallow in his misery a bit longer for his two timingness!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 2) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

Woah. A Lemon tree in the cafe? Very nice touch! I like it a lot.

 

Also, what the heck are the chances of him coming into her shop and her needing to help with something?! Gah! Though it is kind of cute Sesshy counted the days! But STILL!! How dare he not tell her that he was already engaged!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 1) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

Oh ho ho Sesshy is being a jackass and is gonna get whipped by Karma. Go Kags!


Jcdbunny (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

OMG this story is amazing!!!


Debra (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015
I can't see Kagome wearing the ring. I believe she would keep it, probably in a box as a keep sake. Especially since it is so valuable, but actually wearing it would seem too much like she is waiting for him, and would probably be more depressing for her. The ring definitely seems like something he would do. It's a way too keep her young longer so he has more time to convince her to be his mistress. Anyway good chapter and I can't wait for the next.

Mona (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

I can't believe he did that, what a prick and he wonders why she left.  Kagome should respond in similar fashion.

looking forward to the next chapter.


Jennn (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

Love this story. Cannot wait to find out what happens next!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

Great story, keep it coming.


Gleycce (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

in love with this story continues please


Debra (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one. I love how you had Kagome explain that you can't always get what you want. She wanted to his wife and mate, have his children. Unfortunately for her he chose someone else for that, at least the wife and child part. She knows she deserves better than being a mistress (Whore) really. She has more self-respect than that. 


West_Winds (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

Poor Sesshoumaru :(. Great chapter can't wait for more


Adomani (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

Omg! I hope you could update soon):

like really soon. Like now (8

 

keep it coming!!!


Niomi (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

ALSO, I hope there's a happy ending.... I hope you don't make this one of those stories where the author is creating an emotionally turmoil sad "reality" story. Cause I don't think I'll be able to handle it. Ha 


Niomi (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

ah!!! Because I love them so much i just want to see them together NOW. But its just too good at the pace it is now. Sorry I don't have plot bunnies but you are doing great! :)


Strawberry (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

Oh my god, this is so sad..I love it. 

It speaks to me and and I feel it in my heart.

I think a lot of people have felt this kind of

deep hurt and hollowness that both characters

are experiencing. It's a very appropriate title. 

I really love this


Caera (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Oct 2015

Thank you for the wonderful update.Your story is one of the best here.


hana sora (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

Yeah that's life sometimes we just cant have what we want


Silverblossom (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

Awesome chapter, so glad you updated. :) oh so she is not seeing anyone..I wonder how long it will take Sesshoumaru to find out about that..and I am honestly surprised that he accepted it..I expected him to fight her on this and force himself back into her life given how he tried to find her all these years.


Akoq (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

*blownose* *screaming* *crying* *blownose* *screaming* *crying**blownose* *screaming* *crying**blownose* *screaming* *crying*

please update

*blownose* *screaming* *crying*


xDori (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

Thanks for the update! I'm tempted to imagine that Kagome secretly had his child or something lol. 


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