Thanks for the lovely reviews.. next one will be pushed out tomorrow as my eyes are going down on me. :)
Sorry but Kagome is totally pathetic in this one. She was so emotional she forgot Shippo. Good daycares and schools report things like that.Honestly that's really sad on her part. I actually felt really sorry for her character, and felt like she needed an adult to talk to since she sounds like a thirteen year old who just had her first real kiss. You know, one that wasn't just peck on the lips. I hope she doesn't continue to be so in future chapters.
OMG I was rofling on the floor with this chapter! She said all THAT to Rin!! LOL!!! I wonder what's going to happen in the next chapter and I fervently hope that Sesshoumaru is there at his house or if he isn't, then I hope he comes before she leaves. :D
Mona (Chapter 13) - Tue 06 Oct 2015
Great!!!
More please.
Pamela (Chapter 13) - Tue 06 Oct 2015
So hilarious! Good job Kagome. Wonder if Rin's going to tell her father that Kagome got her first orgasm from Sesshoumaru, then proceed to ask her dad what an orgasm is. I could see Kagome blushing and Sesshoumaru smirking, that would be just Kagome's luck. Good thing it wasn't Naruku on the other end of the phone call. Sess was so romantic he will be Kagome's first and last if he has anything to do with it:) what was with the mystery dark hair brown eyes, a mystery now I'm curious:)
Sessygurl (Chapter 13) - Tue 06 Oct 2015
Now she will be on his turf. This could go in so many different directions. loving this story.
roberta (Chapter 12) - Tue 06 Oct 2015
Why to go sassy.
(Dabbing forehead with tissue)
Talk about a cliffhanger o///o
So happy for the new chapters! Keep up the awesome work!
wow that was soooo steamy HOT! I so didn't see THAT coming!! woah. *blush*
Sessygurl (Chapter 12) - Mon 05 Oct 2015
Hot hot hot!
Eva (Chapter 11) - Mon 05 Oct 2015
Sesshoumaru's imagination and hormones have run away from him. It's hard to see Rin so distraught and broken. I want to smother her in hugs.I'm sure she will come around eventually. Kagome and Sesshoumaru can't replace her parents, but they can give her peace.
DSS (Chapter 12) - Mon 05 Oct 2015
i want to say a lot about what I was thinking reading this but I won't but what I will say is finally he understanda his feelings let's see how he will try to win her.
Pamela (Chapter 12) - Mon 05 Oct 2015
Wow! Yep! That was hot:) I think it was great that Kagome caught Sess off guard and they ended up falling together, the fact that the killing perfection managed to lose his balance is so telling as to how her body affected him earlier before he left the room. I love Sess's beast, hehe way to take things into more primal hands. They have elevated dry humping to an art:) I think Sesshoumaru owes her a dinner and a real date maybe a trip to the beach or hot springs for some water fun maybe without the kids, lol!
Debra (Chapter 12) - Mon 05 Oct 2015
Super Sexy! Just love Sesshoumaru all out of control! I hope Kagome realizes how much he wants her, or he finally bothers to fill her in.
Literary Fan (Chapter 12) - Mon 05 Oct 2015
Well. . . I am hoping they are able to talk about what they are beginning to feel for each other, which is obviously being expressed physically. #^_^# Sesshomaru's sons sound so cute. Wait, question: what type of demon was Kaguya since she hadn't been able to communicate with her sons? THANK YOU! for updating so soon. Although it is completely understandable if you have to slow down, especially with such a long shift. Have a good rest and thanks for writing such a great story.
ok that was. hot hot hot
Saiya (Chapter 12) - Mon 05 Oct 2015
Sweet hot Damn. that was steamy.
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