That was awesome! I'll bet Inuyasha was so not expecting that, then of course he was a Baka and got sat, hehe! Great story! Sesshoumaru is certainly the ice prince, but his lines were so perfect. Wonder if Inubaka finally got it:) great chapter can't wait to read more of your amazing writing:)
Yes just the right balance of sad and revenge and a little funny too boot. Great chap.
Jakken admitting to Kagome being scary is priceless.
Koi (Chapter 9) - Tue 22 Sep 2015
This was FANTASTIC! You wrote this chapter exacting how I pictured their reunion would be! Inuyasha is such a jerk. Sesshomaru is so evil! I love it! and Kagome, poor little Kagome. I wish she brought Shippo as well ith her, that Rin has another child to play with. This was such a heartbreaking chapter. I am just so speechless about how everything is unfolding right now. Fantastic chapter, I can't wait until the next chapter. I wonder how Sesshy wIll mend this broken, betrayed type of heart that Kagome carries.
Debra (Chapter 9) - Tue 22 Sep 2015
I really liked this chapter. Not only did she get to release all that emotion she had been holding, but Inuyasha finally realized just how terribly her screwed up. I loved how Sesshoumaru said Inuyasha's reactions were more than worth having the miko with him, and the pleasure he got out of watching Kagome sit him. I can't wait for the next one.
Ree-san (Chapter 9) - Tue 22 Sep 2015
I think you did very well balancing it. It's a very traumatic, painful thing that she's going through. It seems like Inuyasha gets it some, but mostly not. That's one thing about bringing back the recently deceased when they experienced an especially violent death... I wouldn't expect her recovery from this to be swift. It would certainly change one's universe.
Great job with the story so far! Very interesting character development. I'm looking forward to your next updates.
I think you got it right. Was very emotional and played out beautifully. Can't wait for the next chapter.
rose (Chapter 9) - Tue 22 Sep 2015
next chapter please
Ah! The sadness! Looking forward to what happens next.
Ashatan (Chapter 8) - Sun 20 Sep 2015
I couldn't stop reading! This is a really good story. I look forward to reading more Sesshy and Kags! ! !
Koi (Chapter 8) - Sat 19 Sep 2015
This was great to read! I can't believe that Kouga found her and told Inuyasha! I am so excited for the next chapter! I can't wait until the ENCOUNTER, THE QUESTIONING, THE DRAMA!!! I can't wait to see how this goes down! I am soo hooked to this story! I was so happy when I say the notification email about this story! Keep up the fantastic work!
Saiya (Chapter 8) - Sat 19 Sep 2015
Sesshomaru seem like he Doesn't Understand Human Limitations.
Awesome Chapter! I love how so many events took place in this chapter- we got some training, Koga and now Inuyasha is on the way with the rest. I can't wait to read how the confrontation goes between them- I hope it's explosive and we get a protective Sesshoumaru stepping in to say a some cutting remarks to Inuyasha. And I wonder what will happen to Shippo, as in will you make him stay with Kagome or with the gang? Will the gang decide to follow Sesshoumaru like Kagome after finding out that Inuyasha left her and she literally died! Ah so many questions! I can't wait for the next update. :) oh and I love that little moment at the end when Sesshoumaru gave himself credit for choosing the proper dress for her lol. ^^
Deana (Chapter 8) - Fri 18 Sep 2015
Excellent chapter! More please.
Pamela (Chapter 8) - Fri 18 Sep 2015
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it and the bit of tension between Kagome and Sesshoumaru was a flicker of heat. The moment with Kouga with priceless and no wonder she needed the support. It was nice to read that Seashy had a little jealous moment:) uh oh seeing Inuyasha in the next chapter should be interesting I wonder if the Baka is going to yell at her and Sesshoumaru is going to tell him she actually died I bet that would shut him up.
No need to worry about this chapter is was good. Since it's a Sess/ Kag fic the characters are always going to end up a little oc, but I feel you are still keeping true to their personalities. Just keep doing what you are doing. Looking forward to the next chapter
Debra (Chapter 8) - Fri 18 Sep 2015
Great chapter. I personally find it quite believable that Kagome would hug Kouga after everything that happened to her.i can also believe that she isn't ready to see Inuyasha yet. I can see her keeping close to Sesshoumaru when he arrives. I can't wait till Inuyasha actually sees her though. What I was surprised by was that Kouga didn't question her lie. Also loved how Sesshoumaru didn't understand why he didn't like Kouga holding her. I wonder how everyone especially Inuyasha is going to take it when she isn't rushing to Inuyasha anymore. Will she actually lie to her friends? I can't see her lying to Sango about how or why she is with Sesshoumaru. So I rreally can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
I liked this chap. Kagome giving ko a hug and noticing he was nice.
Pamela (Chapter 7) - Fri 18 Sep 2015
Great story! Very promising. I like that Kagome will get stronger under Sesshoumaru's tutelage. Hilarious about the fairy tales. Rin was so cute when she said how Sesshy saved Kagome, hehe. That was a perfectly written awkward moment for the two of them. I love how Kouga always appears just at the right time to bring comic relief. I can't wait to read how Kagome's training progresses and how the adventure continues.
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