I am loving this story so far! Can't wait for the next update...

He's so care to kagome! Please update it asap! B)

I really like how this is panning out. I wonder if Kagome will become close to Rin thus getting closer to the family and thua finding out their secrets? Hmm.... (:

Also, just a tip, make sure you include quotations when people are speaking. It makes it a little confusing when you don't have any (;

-MissKatt

I'm so in love with this fic! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the awesome work!!!

Such an interesting setting :)

At first I was wondering if this was, perhaps, going to be a Haou Airen inspired story, but I'm so glad it doesn't seem to be going that way! I will patiently wait for your next update.

I can't wait to read more! It seems so interesting!

You've caught my interest! Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Wow, keep it coming!!

My gosh. This first chapter is incredible. I am already looking forward to the next update. Will Kagome know/realize that her attacker is dead. Also in the setting of your story, are youkai in hiding or are they out in the open. If so will the owner's strength result in suspicions of what/who he really is? Also, I am assuming Rin and Shippou are either together or related? A few grammar errors but besides that AMAZING introduction. Hope to read an update soon.

I actually really like how this is going so far. Very intriguing (: I can't wait to see where you take this! 

(Though Im a little sad I won't be getting smut out of this fic) 

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-is a pervert-

Keep up the great work love!

-MissKatt