So cute, looking forward to the next chapter
Kyo (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Jul 2015
This fic is sooooo adorable!!!! Love how this will turn out!
Candy (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Jul 2015
Why do you do this to me? It's too cute STOP KILLING ME WITH CUTENESS!
lol Kagome will probably get annoyed at being called prey, she does have a name.
This story is too cute!
No Uta (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Jul 2015
OH.MY.GOOOOODNESS! KYAAAAAA! This chapter was even cuter!!!! Soooooo cute I'm going to crrryyyy!!!!! Omg he growled at her lololololol hahahahahaha too flippin adorable! That was the most precious Sesshy's growl EVER! Then he outdoes himself by pplacing her hands on his cheeks and basically purrs to sooth her like a pup. Omg I can't even KYAAAAA! Girl I love this.
Kae (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Jul 2015
Aw, this chapter was super cute! Sessh caring for his little human is too adorable. I can't wait for more!
Oh yeah! Loving this! Too darn cute! Hope he didn't show too much fang. That could be scary! If course she might just scratch his ears and call him a doggy. Sweet. Cheers!
You kill me with their max cuteness!! XD
The big bad military type daddy demon didn't think to question where the little human came from? Just figured they'd keep her and and she'd be good with that? Sheesh.... should be interesting. ...particularly if she starts talking about tv, planes and the internet.
This made my monday!!!! I just wish it was longer!! Can I cry like kagome now? Lol
Aw poor Kags. I can't imagine how scary that would be for a very small child. I can't wait for the next chapter. This is wonderful!
Awww...that was wonderful! I love how you depicted inu no Taisho. I am really enjoying this story very much.
This is so good. Another lovely chapter and Kagome, true to nature, falling asleep. Cute!
Oh my! This chapter was even more delightful than the first one! Yes I am following it and I can't wait to see where you take us. I did not see that English is not your first language. You are doing remarkably well! Love the curious Sessh being very careful with her.
Such a nice start. Well done and fairly carefully crafted. I only saw one grammar error. I love the premise of the story. Cheers and good luck!
Loving this. It's almost as though Kagome were Rin.....of course this being before Sesshomaru was a "cold-hearted bastard"...lol
Cant say anything but please update as soon you can XD
poor kagome I can't wait to see how she will recact to the whole sesshomaru keeping her thing
Haven (Chapter 5) - Mon 20 Jul 2015
I kinda wanna see how Inu No Taisho takes to her -giggles-
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