omg. it was lovely, as always. mmmm~
Btw, I had to log-in to this site just so that I could leave you a review! ^^ But, reading your fic was worth it.
And, Happy belated birthday. You have a wonderful talent. =) Thanks so much for making my day with your update. Keep it coming!
Kae (Chapter 7) - Mon 15 Jun 2015
I literally squealed when I read that last line! This story is too adorable! I love how exciteable Kagome is and how quickly Sesshoumaru fell for her charms. Dispite the difference in species, they were meant for each other! I can't wait for the next chapter!
PS - Bananas! lol Kagome cracks me up!
Wow, that was fast update. I really like your kagome. She's so inocense and adorable. So cute..how sesshomaru fight his desire.
Wishing you a belated happy birthday dear~ Really like your writing style and loving the story :) Thank you for the quick updates and looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
Oh..i can't wait the fluffy stuf. I wonder,does he still have mokomoko?
If something happen, can she pregnant? Haha i just can't imagine a pregnant mermaid swam to the ocean. It's funny. Coz,they are sexy creature.
Ops it's too hard to resist kagome and poor sesshomaru, he must hide it for all day XD
Nice chapter. What is the mermaid food? Fish?
What kagome wear for the bottom? Skirt or panties maybe. Sorry..in the begining of story i imagine she lookslike a mermaid for the bottom part.
Oktobre (Chapter 5) - Wed 10 Jun 2015
The banana bit got me. "Mermaids really fucking love bananas" Can't wait to read more of this. It's sincerly awesome! Keep up the good work!!!!
Aw, they are too cute anyway! :)
Loveyaa (Chapter 4) - Mon 08 Jun 2015
Hi. I'm wondering how they will decide to get in touch with each after this, especially since they can't really communicate with each other. I'm intrigued and can't wait to see what happens next :)
I luv this scene. How they try to understand one to another language.
Nice story,i hope they dont separate soon.
And it's funny..
Does it means that sesshomaru is a bird or a man? Why not a dog demon?
Hehe..sorry if i'm misread.
I have to admit this chapter was cute with them trying to understand one another. I wonder if they'll ever get over the language barrier between them. Can't wait to find out!
Great, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Belated Mother's Day!
M- is the million things she gave me. O- means only that she's growing old. T- is for the tears shed to save me. H- is for her heart of purest gold. E- is for her eyes, with love & light shining. R- means right, and right she'll always be.
Happy Belated Mother's Day!
I am so in love with this story! I noticed that one of your tags were erotica for this story, so i am beyond excited to see how the hell these two are gonna have sex (if they do?)
No Uta (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Jun 2015
I adore this chapter! I adore how they manage to communicate! Omg I adore them! I swear I am getting tender hearted as of late. I normally read tales of angst, dark content, tragedy wrapped up with all types of dreadful situations. I have fallen in love with your story. I honestly feel like I am reading an enchanted fairytale! I am fond of the humour, the special moments and tender exchanges between Sesshomaru and Kagome. I laughed so hard at the entire shark ordeal! Omg that was a hoot! Phenomenal job!
Keep it coming!!
No Uta (Chapter 3) - Thu 04 Jun 2015
Oh wow! I absolutely loved this chapter. I find their interactions precious. The way they manage to communicate is endearing. I am enjoying Sesshomaru's role as Kagome's saviour. Even though he is kind-hearted in this story, you've kept him fearless. He still has that stfu glare that he gives. I am thrilled with how this is moving along. I like the pace of the plot. I can't get over how they are both completely different species that cannot understand one another. I believe that is what I love most about this fic. They may very well eventually learn to communicate more effectively or learn the other's language. If that is the case, I'll still fancy that they started where they did. Thank you for the wonderful update. I'll look forward to your return from when you are done with more pressing matters in r/l.
beautiful story! need more~
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