Oh crap. She's gotten herself into a predicament. I feel this won't end well for her or the inu-tachi group. Looking forward to more! ( just a side note: your 'pour' is missing its 'o'. I do that too frequently in my own writing. I'll read something over multiple times, and still have to fix stuff after I've submitted it.) Great job! And happy writing. I'm eager for more.
mandy (Chapter 5) - Wed 21 Jan 2015
Oh snap! You've left me with this aching need to know. And I imagine being stab hurts quite a lot. So I don't know what that witch is talking about. Great installment. Great use of the prompt. I'm excited for more!
i would be screaming bloody murder
mandy (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 Jan 2015
I love your portrayal of Kagome so far. She' feels so right! Also great job describing things with your word limit. That's my biggest problem lol. I love your story so far. Great work!
ok she is absolutly nust to think its not going to hurt
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