Sorry to tell you. Since I last left a review, I have noticed that several things didn't make that much sense, or it just felt like your missing a few chapters. What happened during that time that Kagome ended up staying with Sesshoumaru for a week? It wasn't till later that I also noticed that you never mentioned that Sesshoumaru was supposed to kill everyone on some night because of a spell that us readers barely heard any hint of on Sesshoumaru himself besides a flute sound when he talked to Kagome and collasped. When your summary talks about Kagome under a spell? I'm confused. In a couple of parts it felt like you were also missing those few chapters that helped connect them. I don't feel a connection between your two main characters besides sesshoumaru's agravation at her not listening to him. Maybe a few small chapters on what the situation is. If I missed something please send me a pm!
Hiya! This is awesome so far. Though I love the long chapter types, may I vote for 1 long chapter every 50 chapters?
Wow the 200 word count makes a big difference. I like it. Great update
Zeelian (Chapter 87) - Mon 29 Feb 2016
Vile = Horrible, awful, repulsive (ie Naraku, the vile hanyo) Vial = small container for liquids (ie a vial of water)
Kind of cconfused wheres the curse going
Sure longer chaps would be great
JoLynn (Chapter 86) - Mon 15 Feb 2016
This took the weirdest turn
Good, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
Great update
Thanks for the update
Saiya (Chapter 74) - Thu 07 Jan 2016
Ouch.
Mona (Chapter 74) - Thu 07 Jan 2016
I hope you can update more soon... I wonder why Kagome seems to be battling alone.
Yes please thank you
Mona (Chapter 72) - Thu 07 Jan 2016
Awesome updates... Looking forward to more to come.
I don't get it. I'm loving your story but I'm a little bit confused. Is sesshomaru really dead or is he in a death like sleep like in sleeping Beauty? I'm not making fun of your story by saying that whole sleeping Beauty thing. Well if you think about it he IS kinda beautiful for a man. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Suspense! Need more!
Mona (Chapter 68) - Thu 31 Dec 2015
Hope you update again soon.
Thanks for the updates have a happy new years
I hope none of sesshomarus people try to hurt her after that little speech on sesshomaru choosing death since kagome couldn't lift the spell she supposedly put on him. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Sesshy has great trust in his miko
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