Please keep updating this story. Care to make a bet I love it but I hate that it ended on them picking up inuyasha at the airport and I want to know how kagome acts when she face to face with inuyasha.

Please keep updating this story. Care to make a bet I love it but I hate that it ended on them picking up inuyasha at the airport and I want to know how kagome acts when she face to face with inuyasha.

Please update soon, wanna know how this ends.

Loved the first series. And completely in love with set of the after mating. Can’t wait for a update wondering if kagome could be pregnant since they didn’t have protected sex. ???? 

I‘d like to start off by saying that your writing itself is great, and I hope you continue to write on dokuga. However, I have problems with this story. Sesshomaru is quite despicable. He insinuates that those who work as prostitutes to gain their freedom are whores who have no morals (which is completely untrue and is pretty much victim blaming). He contracts Kagome into having sex with him because she has no other option, and sex when there is no other choice is basically rape. He also repeatedly forces Kagome into intimate contact against her will. He acts as if just because he “saved her” and “she needs protection” he has justification to force her to remain with him against her will. And I know you addressed this last offense, but the comment about returning her was disgusting, and the worst part about it was that because he “bought her freedom” he believea that she owes her life to him. It’s gross.

The reason I addressed this is because you are most likely going to continue to portray him in a positive light if you continue this story, which I find a little unsettling. At the same time, I understand if this is how you prefer the story, and I don’t mean to be harsh. I apologize if I come across as mean. 

I really do hope to read more of your work! Thanks :-)

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This story is awesome!!! Keep up the great work - I can't wait for the next chapter! I will love seeing Kag's reaction to Sango being freed :D

I looovvvere this the mall u  Mentioned was discover Mills right

The way he worded it made it seem like her fears of trading one master for another came true. Nicely done. :3

I really like this story and I like some of the revisions that you have done thus far.

Even though I liked the original version I like this version so much better.

I find that your portrayal of Sesshomaru is very appealing to me. I like his softer side but you do keep his 'darker' side on the frenges and that's 

makes him so appealing. He is very patient with Kagome and eventually his kindness and passion will bring her around to love him.

I am looking forward to the chapters that has Sesshomaru and Miroku saving Sango and bringing down Hojo and his whole operation of human 

trafficking, extortion and drug dealing, to name a few I'm sure.

Looking forward to future updates to this intriguing story.

Excellent writing!!!

I'm going to be a bit of a hypocrit and say you should definatly update this. It's a rather unique story. I'd like to see where it goes.

Finish this story. Please!

You definitely should write more to this!!! I'm looking forward to this! :D

This is definitely very interesting. Why Sesshoumaru chose her as a mate just out the blue like that? I can tell maybe he has always cared for her maybe in the distance through everything. I can't wait to find out!

looking forward to more chapters really enjoying the story 

Yay!!! Story continued I love this story so much I cant count how many times I read it and wished for it to continue... So how is Sesshy gonna win kags?? update soon ty

Do you still live in Atlanta? I ask for um. Reasons. 

That and I live in dunwoody...

I'm glad this isn't going to die! Really like your story! 

Why does sesshoumaru want kagome so bad? Did he fall in love with her while she was dancing or was there prior history between them.

its a good story but i feel bad for kagome!

Iam dying otu of curiousity at how he met/saw her and wanted her as his permanet mate....
But this chapter is very good. I like how Sesshomaru truly wishes to help Sango because it would make Kagome happy. And maybe she is battered, but I do not think Kagome is broken. She can still laugh, she can share the joys and sorrows, she can still care for others, and she can still walk forward. She may stumble with the new drastic changes in her life but that is to be expected.

She's forced to work for a cruel man whom she fears would rape her at any moment, then is sold to Sesshomaru against her will, then is tricked into mating Sesshomaru. And while, yes, Sesshomaru is better than staying with Hojo, Kagome doesn't know that. She knows next to nothing of Sesshomaru except of that night.  He needs to look at it from her POV. Sesshomaru forced Kagome to say she'd go with him so his plan would work, to her, he was humiliating her. She now knows he's rich (but probably doesn't understand how rich), and she thinks he's sort of deviant - he did after all buy her from Hojo.

He himself has not opened up to her, so how can he expect Kagome to open up to him? To let down her defenses and become even more vulnerable to him? As his mate, she sees herself basically his slave for all of time with no way out, not even death. He is showing patience for her but it has been only one day for them and Kagome feels completely at his mercy.

I like how you're showing Sesshomaru's considerate side, but it seems he is lacking the knowledge of how to call a truce with Kagome and make her comfortable enough to start lowering her defenses to let him get to know her and bond closer.