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Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Wed 17 Dec 2014

This was a very insightful and interesting chapter. I am beginning to rethink that maybe Kagome's mother's darkside is not dark at all. But there is something interesting going on with her. I feel sorry for the Inu Bitch and Inuyasha that are conniving to try to stop the mating/marriage of my favorite couple. Well maybe not so sorry, because they are going to get what is due them for getting in the way.

Who would have thought that Kagome was the actual jewel herself and that Sesshoumaru was destined to protect her.

This chapter was very well written and fascinating. I am hoping that the next chapter will be the wedding day and mating, which I am sure will be exciting. Excellent job!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Thu 11 Dec 2014

Great chapter, keep it coming.


dancingfingers (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Dec 2014

I actually don't mind their relationship progress so fast; it is refreshing, coming from you. Besides, it doesn't seem like the situation is forced on them or something, and added to the fact that you promised more to come, I anticipate the story more and more! :)

Besides, it's not like they're making no efforts on getting to know each other. It's fun, harmless, and definitely warming to see the both of them to love each other so deeply.

Anyway, I'm a bit relieved that Sango supported Kagome... it seemed that she has no other reason than Kagome to be happy. I hope Sango is not included in the group of people who wants to take advantage from Kagome or Sesshomaru.

Thank you for the update, and I really enjoy the lime--juicy!

 

P.S I don't think this will be the last we see Inuyasha... even though his inner beast knew not to mess with the Alpha, Inuyasha is waaaaayyyyyy to stubborn to realize he's lost his toy. I wonder if Kikyo would make an appearance again as well.


Katrina Kee (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Dec 2014

Poor Kagome! I hope that she recovers soon! While I cannot wait for the wedding, I still am cautious about Kagome's mother and the earth mother miko........ Can't wait for what the next chapter will bring!!!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Dec 2014

I meant to say in my previous review, I think the pace of the romance and mating fits the plot of this story.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Dec 2014

There are are a couple of errors but not enough to take away from the story. I like the pace of the romance and mating because I don't like long drawn out romances. You did a nice job of writing in this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.


Most Unlikely Angel (Chapter 2) - Sat 06 Dec 2014

An interesting story. A bit more abrupt with the ramance than i usually luke but i'm still enjoying it. Lots of potential here. I look forward to reading more.

 


rose (Chapter 2) - Fri 05 Dec 2014

next chapter please


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Dec 2014

So the plot thickens. Who knew that Kagome's mom would have a dark side. Maybe Kagome's plan for a Christmas wedding will still be on but only with Sesshoumaru. That would be nice. Now for the review, the story is very well written. In my opinion, your voice, speech, grammar and spelling is impeccable. The way you write and the plot twists are engaging which makes the reader want to delve more into the story. I, myself, am thrilled by the story and looking forward to future chapters. I know you will not disappoint. You are an excellent author; keep up the good work. A piece well done!

BTW I loved reading one of your other stories 'Her Destiny'. It was fanstastic!


dancingfingers (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Dec 2014

Wow. I've been expecting for Kagome's mother to be some sort of greedy mother as you've written her character before, but still... the way you came up with everything still amazes me. I was kinda suspicious when she sounded so... loving and very motherly from Kagome's stories, but when I read that she only wanted Sesshomaru around only to wipe him off of this world just... kinda... upsets me (such an understatement). I wonder how many true friends she has, and if her other family members ever truly love Kagome as herself... not for her power.

On another note, damn Inuyasha... your behavior almost made me stop reading altogether (I never like rape scene, just nay), but thankfully Sesshomaru saved the day. I wonder who's been telling him that having concubines is okay and if it were another plot to trap Kagome into something she never wanted in the first place, whether for her powers or not.

Anyway, you did a great job, and I can't wait for the ups and downs of our pairing as they build their budding relationship! And also your twists and turns--I just love them so much, soo.... I'll look forward for the next!

 

Oh, and Sesshomaru is so.... dreamy. Thank you for writing him like that!!!


Nicka (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Dec 2014

Another Excellent Chapter.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Dec 2014

Great chapter, Inuyasha is an idiot, keep it coming.


Katrina Kee (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Dec 2014

This story is great! Please explain in greater detail about the earth mother miko and what Kagomes' mom was thinking when she thought of tracking Sesshomaru, etc. This sounds like another very interesting story within this story! And, I wonder, who has been feeding Inuyasha such ideas of having concubines as well as a mate? Didn't he grow up learning about inu culture, etc? It sounds as if he wants both cake AND pie for dessert!!! Ha ha! Doesn't he know that too much "sugar" will rot his teeth!!! Ha ha! I cannot for the next chapter! Keep em coming!


dancingfingers (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

I'm glad to see a new story from you!

 

This is really a great start. I'm looking forward for more!


Nicka (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

Love love love how this is starting. 


rose (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

next chapter please


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Thanksgiving!


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