I love love love your story!! I have read a bunch of different stories in here and all with different plots but this has to be the most interesting one to date that I have read. I can't wait tell the next chapter. Keep up the great work!!
Thank you so much for updating so quickly! I have fallen in love with this story and there are so many avenues it can go!! I am a bit confused about one thing, we know that Gin is half-blood like the other kids but you also stated that he's not as half-blooded since his mother family prized themselves on their blood purity.
So...what exactly is he?
HI, LOVE THE STORY SO FAR ,KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING. I HOPE THE ORIGINAL SESSHOUMARU CAN FIND HIS WAY BACK TO KAGOME AND THEY MATE AND KILL THEB FAKE KAMI TOGETHER.............................................TDANIEL
More, keep it coming.
You have trouble with tenses, it seems.
Meet is present tense, met is past tense. "They will meet eventually." "They met before."
Has is present tense, and had is past. "The girl's jyaki has disappeared."
Other than all the grammar issues, I love the story. Keep it up! ^_^
My you've been busy. I love the new material. I'm so torn between loyalty to the original world, and yet I'm facinated to see where you're going with World2.0. Thanks for sharing your muse.
Lovely chapters, the story is progressing at a wonderful pace. Not to rushed nor to slow, looking forward to future chapters and how you pull it all together!
You must update.Please.Im begging.This is so good i added it to my favorite list.Thank you for sharing your fic with us:-)
Lovely chapter, keep it coming
I know you wrote that you struggled with this particular chapter, but I think you might be a little overly critical of your work. Most artists, whether they work with paints or words, are rarely satisfied completely by their work striving for perfection. Personally, I found this chapter very satisfying meeting my expectations. Trying not to expose SPOILERS, I appreciate the differentiation between instinct and reason in our alternate character. I also really enjoy the direction you are going with Gin. Please don't get discouraged and keep up the good work.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!
More, keep it coming
Well, for one he'll be shock by her necklace and at his defense of her. Maybe annoyed that he did, but finds a calmness or peace at being near her. Kagome will be shocked to see Sessh and may at first mistaken this Sessh for her Seshh - that would be interesting. She may break down at seeing Sessh and then at realizing that it's not her Seshh. Poor Kags. So close, but yet so far.
Okay, if you have another chapter already done, I demand that you post it like NOW. XD I absolutely hate waiting after a cliffhanger!!!! And I'm really anxious to see how this goes.
Btw, I don't think I've posted any reviews on here yet. Aside from a few typos that I might have noticed but also would have forgotten by now, I'm really loving the story. Aside from a slight quickness to the way tense situations and events run, your storytelling flows nicely and you've got a great description style. Looking forward to the rest!
Keep it coming.
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