Well I’m really loving this cute story. It’s looking pretty good, no horrible spelling or grammar errors. I love how they are working together to make this their day. It is about them after all. 

Aw..that’s sweet. I love teal. 

Great idea! AWK! Weddings are crazy! Those huge organized things can get nuts. Can’t wait to see what they do to derail the Bridezilla wedding. ????????

Such a cute story... what a way to avoid becoming a bridezilla.... is there a mom-zilla?

Oh this is too cute! I love your fics and writing! I hope to see more soon! Thx! Good luck and take care!

This was great reading and I hope to see another update soon!!

I can totally see Kagome coercing her mother into taking back her wedding, and it would give them the much needed mother-daughter time that both of them enjoy!!

Good, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.

 

next chapter please

Great, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

next chapter please

This sounds fantastic and fun!

Fortunately, I don't have an awkward wedding moment like yours (my dad has learned to keep his yap shut in public), I always feel awkward going through the reviving line: "Hi, how are you?" "Fine. I'm ___." "I'm ___, nice to meet you." silence.

Regardless, I would hate having my wedding hijacked. It would definitely be a simpler, quieter affair too :)

Nice, keep it coming.  

Oh good, good, good, you're actually going to write this.  Yes, Cakeiton had some brilliant ideas and I am dying to see you incorporate them into this little fic.  I like the fact you are having them sabotage their own wedding - oh what fun!

Sorry to hear your parents are trying to fix you up with one of the groomsmen - it's got to be frustrating when you've made it pretty clear you're just not ready.  I hope that you are at least able to enjoy the wedding and reception!

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. 

I have been to all of one weddings in my life. That was where I tried asperagus for the first time, and that was the only time I ever saw my father in a tux. I was pretty young, 'bout six. I think I was the flower girl myself; that or the ring barer. Can't recall. 

Anyhow, with that thought in mind, I really don't normally find myself that inclined to wedding fics. They're not something I have any emotional connection to personally - no fond memories to recall and reminsce over when I'm doing. That said, I still think this fic looks interesting. 

Before, I haven't ever seen the idea of them sabotaging their own wedding. It seems like an interesting concept, though where you take it is up to you. The first chapter doesn't give us much to go by, but I think it'll be good. I know you write well, The Omiai, To Go Onward and The Mori Christmas Gala under your belt, I think it'll be good. 

Looking forward to more,

Rin-Ling

Love it... can't wait for the next chapter!