I am loving your story. Expecially the way you are depicting Sesshomaru, it remainds me of his behavior in the early episodes.

I liked this chapter a lot, expecially Toga. I wanna see more of kagome thou.

OmG that was such a good chapter, and it was worth waiting for Sesshomaru and Ryuunosuke are so funny when they talk. Sorry for the late review, my computer is dead so I only get to use the internet once in a while.

Great chapter, update soon please.

Both chapters nice, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

Can't wait to see how all these pieces come together. Keep it coming. 

My curiousity is piqued and I need more. More please

I really like this chapter, and im interested in the way your gonna take Kagome and Kykios relationship.

OMg this was a really good begining. Im wondering if something wierd happen to Kagomes father or did he died normaly.

Cant wait for what happens next.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!

I like what you have going with this story.  What I really liked was how you split up the scenes for each person's point of view.  I look forward to reading more :)

this story is very good and very entertaining