While this story has a bit of a sad beginning in the fact that Kagome's parents gave her away to Mei-sama, Kagome was, in fact, very lucky that she wasn't killed at birth for having a birthmark covering her face like that. I am sure that she will fare a bit better in her mew home, even if she is surrounded by Inu dekmons instead of humans.

I know it has been two years since you have last looked at this story, but could you please give it another once -over and add a bit more to it? I personally would like to read about Kagome's interactions with those at court, as well as Sesshomaru, if he comes to call upon his Mother. Perhaps he would come at a time in which he has sweet Rin at his side?

Thank you for your story. I did like what you had written so far.

I hope for a wonderful story... update soon!

Great start, I would love to read more, but you really need to fix your formatting. A wall of text is hard to read, and frustrating to others. Bad formatting can stop people from reading your story.

But I love the story so far, and I would really like to see more of it!

Great potential, but as mebntioned formating needs to be fixed, wall of text is hard to read :p

Looks interesting. Please reformat it though, you've fallen victim to the wall of text. Makes it a bit difficult to read. I'm interested to see where you go with this.