Hello,
the writing style may not be one of your best in this fic, but in this case I don't care, because I love the message you are sending!!!
I love your idea of a Sesshoumaru who supports orphans and tries every year to give them a beautiful and unforgettable Christmas! And I love that he doesn't care about how much money he will "loose" with such an event ... many portray him as a ruthless businessman who cares only about his profit. You showed us another site of him, a more compassion one, and I liked that very much!
I also liked that Sesshomaru hadn't "special" feelings only for Rin. You wrote about two other children he paid special attention to. It doesn't always have to be only Rin! So well done!!!
It's also rather nice to read a story where Kagome doesn't have to accomplish something "humanly" impossible to gain Sesshoumaru's attention and interested. They share their love for children and Christmas!
This is a nice fic with a wonderful message and I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing!!!
Perfect!
She's so great! Good job, Kaggers!
I can't wait for the gala!
That last line was brilliant!
Hmm...
That last paragraph has got me all tickly!!!
Rina (Chapter 16) - Sat 21 Dec 2013
Looks more promising to the children now.
Sesshomaru's good^^
Nicole (Chapter 16) - Sat 21 Dec 2013
That promises to be much happier for the children :)
Oh, snap...
Sesshomaru is good...
She's intense. Seriously.
Snickers!
That rocks! You guys should be nice to Kagome!
There were kisses that followed?
AHHHHH!
Unbelievable! Ahhh!
They're so casual about it! Gosh!
I'm squealing! Goodness! That was perfect!
HAHAHAHAH!
I'm snorting and snickering. It is awesome! Loving it!
Stop Sango! It's not Like that!
Stop Sango! It's not Like that!
Poor Sesshomaru! Bring on the opportune romance!
Poor Sesshomaru! Bring on the opportune romance!
Yoshi! You can do this Kaggy!
Yeah!
He doesn't even like her that way!
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