This history is very good. Sorry for mistakes. But my english is horrible. I'm new in the Dokuga, but is possible receive notifications when the history is update? If yes, how I do?
I hope that you post the next chapter soon. Please can you tell me when you have the new chapter? I hope that you understand, if you don't, use Translate for the message in Portuguese.
If, you answer me, can be in English :)
I understand +/- :)
Esta história é muito boa. Desculpe pelos erros (e se não tiver entendido, desculpe mais ainda... trsrs) Meu inglês é horrível. Sou nova no Dokuga, mas é possíble receber notificação sempre que a história é atualizada? Se sim, como faço?
Eu espero que você poste o próximo capítulo logo. Por favor, porderia avisar-me quando tiver um novo capítulo? Eu espero que consiga entender :)
I am loving this story so far!!! I came across it looking for something new to read and I usually don't read any of the in progress storys but your summary got my attention!! A few things:
1) "It waa a little weird for him and his half-brother not fighting like they usually do whenever they had come across each other's paths." In this sentence you misspelled was.
2) I love the way you have capatured Sesshomaru!!! You have captured his personality spot on!! Keep up the good work!!
3) I love it when people insert characters like Sesshomaru's mother, sister and etc. I find the story way more enjoyable.
And finally...
I anxiously await the next chapter!! Hopefully it will be in a day or two?? The reason I don't usually read in progress stories is because I usually have to re-read the whole thing to even remember what the story is about (I use to read like five or six different stories at the same time) and that is hard to do if the story has almost 50 chapters. Another reason is that I get disappointed when all the sudden, the author decides not to finish the story just when it gets good. And so, as I said before I anxiously await the next chapter!!!
looking forward for more haha!
I LOVE IT!!! keep going LOL
never stop ^_^''
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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