I love this story the way it was written before. Why did u decide to rewrite it? I was looking forward to seeing what was going to happen in the other version.
Love the detail and how he low of the story is going. I cannot wait to see everything unfold when Sesshou-kun is introduced.  
Keep it up you're doing great! 
  
Ashley 
      
rose (Chapter 1) -  Mon 16 Sep 2013 
next chapter please 
      
Great start on the rewrite, keep it coming. 
      
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